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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Okay, poke me with your sharp sticks of vengence all you want but you stay the hell away from my fans. They didn't do anything to you, back off. You have the right to insult me in this review, since I'm open to negative critism, but lay off of the other reviewers. That just not proper. Another thing, I'm a dude. One more thing, just because I protray one woman having sex doesn't mean I'm a myoginist. You people act like women never have sex. Well, I hate to brake it to you, but it happens. I like girls. Some of my best friends are female. The only kind of people who piss my off are people who feel I should burn in hell for making a non-pc joke. Excuse me if I speak my mind. I'll also let you know that this is my most reviewed story. So thank you, all you negative reviewers, for drawling attention to my work. I couldn't have done it without you.
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Title: Crispy
Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was soooo funny! I love it! .... Not!!! I hate the stupid story! It's not nice to make fun of blind people! What if you're blind and you got hit by a truck? All the people will say: "Ha ha! Look at the bitch whose blind! Good thing she's dead!" Now do you know how blinds feel!? My gosh! You should either: 1 Take off this ridicoulus fuckin piece of shit called a "story" or 2 Burn in hell or 3 Die! I really hope you die. This story is sooo stupid! I hope you do all 3! But I really hope you take off the story, die and go burn in hell! You are stupid! Makin fun of blind people! Pokemon are okay! You make girls bad! You call us bastards for reading! At leaste we read! Oh and whoever thinks this story is funny, BURN IN HELL YOU STUPID BITCHES!!!!!!!!! DOES ANYBODY ELSE AGREE WITH ME!?!?!? PLEASE SAY YES! I REALLY HOPE WHOEVER WROTE THIS AND LIKES THIS STORY SHOULD DIE AND BURN IN HELL!!!!!! HOW WOULD YOU FEEL IF YOU'RE BLIND AND PEOPLE MAKE FUN OF YOU!?!?!?! SO SHUT THE FUCK UP PEOPLE! The Reviewer Who HATES your guts Icey Queen10 :p
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Reviewed By: Risha On: August 17, 2004 14:13 CDT
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OMG I LAUGHED SO FUCKING HARD!!!! JESUS that was great. -rolls over laughing- write more!
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Title: dumbass
Reviewed By: GOTHICPOKEFAN On: August 07, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you give a bad name to women. You underestimate what it's like to be blind. You made a girl seem like a slut, and you turned something imanginitive into an world filled with sex and erotica. three words buddy DUMB ASS STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 03:14 CDT
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I LAUGHED MY FUCKING ASS OFF!!! damn that was the funniest thing I've ever read. all those people getting offended can SUCK MY ASS!!! they take everything way too seriously. much love, shawna
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Title: It's funny, but f-in GAY!
Reviewed By: U. Suck (like Hell) On: June 19, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
If u ask me, itt's funny. Don't take things TOO seriously, other people, cuz she REALLY WAS high on sum dam drug. But, dude, we WANT FUCKIN DETAILS!!! METAPHORS ARENT FUCKIN ENOUGH!!! GODDAMIT, F U!!!
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Okay, the Brock part made me wanna rip your head off, stuff it with garlic, and toss you in a river. But other than that it was fricken funny. But just for good measure... *punches you*
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:39 CDT
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HOLY FUCKING SHIT THAT WAS FUNNY. I laughed my damn ass off! Pokemon characters are all idiots.
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Reviewed By: keira On: June 14, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL. ROFL. R.O.FUCKING.F.L. We need more authors like you.. .. or you just need to get high and write more often. I nearly pissed myself.
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Title: #@$#@!$#@!
Reviewed By: (im not telling you people) On: June 10, 2004 18:36 CDT
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Listen here a lot of people LIKE pokemon okay!And one of my best friends in blind so you shouldn't make fun of blind people!Why were you making fun of them anyone and oh yeah calling pikachu stupid is somthing funny! Pikachu happens to be the reason I started liking anime!Oh and people who don't agree with me fine whatever it doesn't matter because I don't care if people flame my flame hah!
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Reviewed By: Does it matter?.... On: June 04, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this review really doesn't frignn' matter...but I just want to say a few things: 1) the story was very funny...the people that say otherwise should execute themselves with the largest caliber weapon possible. 2) To all the Blind people out there, HA YOU CAN'T READ THIS, MUHAHAHAHA. 3) Pokemon deserved this. That is all...thank you and rot in hell
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 21:24 CDT
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To the last reviewer, you have no understanding of irony, do you? I never meant to offend anyone with this story. I simply had an idea and started to write. I found it humorist and, so far, so have two other people. I glad that some people out there understand the irony in the story and realize that it's suppose to be very tounge-in-cheek. I've got nothing against blind people. I don't know any, myself, but I don't rate people just on one-thing. Several people in my family are highly racist agaisnt blacks and homosexuals and that makes me sick that anyone could hate another person so much just because of something like that. Crap like that doesn't matter to me. We're all people. Little differences is what make us people. They're what make life intresting. This story is meant to be funny. It's my way of cooping with the stupidity of the world. I cope by making fun of it. I make fun of it by living it just for a little bit. So, you people can hope violence on me all you want, but I don't see how that will help anything. If your reviews have done anything, it has simplely made me hate people more. To all, I say, develop a sense of humor. Really, man.
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: May 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only good part of this fic that I can see is the spelling and Grammar, although even that could use some work. You should read some more fanfics before you make another attempt. I do not like people who believe stereotypes of any sort and hope that they realize their mistake before they regret believing in something that isn't so. Also, if you write something while on drugs, you should go over it so that way it will be written with a good quality. Have you ever heard of editing and revising? I doubt it. And you should try to see what it's like being blind. I doubt that it would be funny to you if you walked into a tree if you didn't see it. And if you do, I actually hope that you get a short, broken off branch through your eye. Maybe then you'll see that it isn't as pleasant to be blind as you seem to think it is. But even then, I doubt that you'd have two bits of common sense in that rock you call a brain.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Yamatani On: May 28, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Anything that can actually make me laugh milk up my nose ( yes... i did... and my mom thought i was having a spasm... ) is worth reading. heh... the parts about brock being blind... that's what got me ^_^
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Title: tohamsanhwc@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: May596 On: May 24, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again. Like I said, THIS IS A STUPID STORY TO READ. What do you mean Tempest Wing? About laughing at the Brock jokes? MANY PEOPLE DIE FROM BEING BLIND!!! You should be ashamed of yourself!
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