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 Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2004 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOLY FUCKING SHIT THAT WAS FUNNY. I laughed my damn ass off! Pokemon characters are all idiots.
 Reviewed By: keira  On: June 14, 2004 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
ROFL. ROFL. R.O.FUCKING.F.L. We need more authors like you.. .. or you just need to get high and write more often. I nearly pissed myself.
 Title: #@$#@!$#@!
Reviewed By: (im not telling you people)  On: June 10, 2004 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Listen here a lot of people LIKE pokemon okay!And one of my best friends in blind so you shouldn't make fun of blind people!Why were you making fun of them anyone and oh yeah calling pikachu stupid is somthing funny! Pikachu happens to be the reason I started liking anime!Oh and people who don't agree with me fine whatever it doesn't matter because I don't care if people flame my flame hah!
 Reviewed By: Does it matter?....  On: June 04, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know this review really doesn't frignn' matter...but I just want to say a few things: 1) the story was very funny...the people that say otherwise should execute themselves with the largest caliber weapon possible. 2) To all the Blind people out there, HA YOU CAN'T READ THIS, MUHAHAHAHA. 3) Pokemon deserved this. That is all...thank you and rot in hell
 Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 30, 2004 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
To the last reviewer, you have no understanding of irony, do you? I never meant to offend anyone with this story. I simply had an idea and started to write. I found it humorist and, so far, so have two other people. I glad that some people out there understand the irony in the story and realize that it's suppose to be very tounge-in-cheek. I've got nothing against blind people. I don't know any, myself, but I don't rate people just on one-thing. Several people in my family are highly racist agaisnt blacks and homosexuals and that makes me sick that anyone could hate another person so much just because of something like that. Crap like that doesn't matter to me. We're all people. Little differences is what make us people. They're what make life intresting. This story is meant to be funny. It's my way of cooping with the stupidity of the world. I cope by making fun of it. I make fun of it by living it just for a little bit. So, you people can hope violence on me all you want, but I don't see how that will help anything. If your reviews have done anything, it has simplely made me hate people more. To all, I say, develop a sense of humor. Really, man.
 Reviewed By: An Idiot  On: May 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
The only good part of this fic that I can see is the spelling and Grammar, although even that could use some work. You should read some more fanfics before you make another attempt. I do not like people who believe stereotypes of any sort and hope that they realize their mistake before they regret believing in something that isn't so. Also, if you write something while on drugs, you should go over it so that way it will be written with a good quality. Have you ever heard of editing and revising? I doubt it. And you should try to see what it's like being blind. I doubt that it would be funny to you if you walked into a tree if you didn't see it. And if you do, I actually hope that you get a short, broken off branch through your eye. Maybe then you'll see that it isn't as pleasant to be blind as you seem to think it is. But even then, I doubt that you'd have two bits of common sense in that rock you call a brain.
 Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Yamatani  On: May 28, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
^_^ Anything that can actually make me laugh milk up my nose ( yes... i did... and my mom thought i was having a spasm... ) is worth reading. heh... the parts about brock being blind... that's what got me ^_^
 Title: tohamsanhwc@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: May596  On: May 24, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's me again. Like I said, THIS IS A STUPID STORY TO READ. What do you mean Tempest Wing? About laughing at the Brock jokes? MANY PEOPLE DIE FROM BEING BLIND!!! You should be ashamed of yourself!
 Title: Crispy
Reviewed By: May596  On: May 24, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a STUPID STORY TO READ!!!!!!! You call us bastards just for reading? You are a bitch!
 Title: You people...
Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2004 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the 'you suck" number one and the "you suck" number two have no sense of humor and completely missed the point of the story. I making fun of shitty lemons. I'm also making fun of people who take everything to goddamn seriously. Ring any bells?
 Reviewed By: This guy  On: May 20, 2004 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Testing, testing, one, two, three
 Title: you suck
Reviewed By: thid supose to be fnny  On: May 20, 2004 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was stupid really it's not funny yo make fun of blind people and over the million people dies from ads
 Title: you suck
Reviewed By: you suck  On: May 20, 2004 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please take this load of **** away Oh. wha the hell is wrong with you making fun of blind ppl. You sick basturd.
 Title: ????????????
Reviewed By: unknown123  On: May 19, 2004 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT ON EARTH WAS THAT!!!!! YOU SERIOUSLY WERE HIGH ON SOME KIND OF DRUG WHEN U WROTE THAT!!!
 Reviewed By: tempestwind [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2004 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was laughing so hard on the Brock jokes It was a comedy more so then a lemon
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