| "Enslaved" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: oddgirl On: July 10, 2004 20:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
but hey all in all this fanfic is original unlike from others.. definetly good ideas keep up the origninality
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Reviewed By: Oddgirl On: July 10, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't think u should do it like a script, it would be better if it was just a story and in the 3rd tense, cauz this is sounding more as if you wrote it for a screen play, and i think it would be better in another form
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Reviewed By: Vash666 On: June 04, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Size I think that you are doing a great job! keep it up man.
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Reviewed By: Ananas On: May 17, 2004 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey F. Heero, I think that the story is becoming more and more interesting. In a way I liked the way you ended this chapter it's not so much like the other ones. The way the characters are, which from what little I have seen of Hellsing, seems to still to the character though. I've enjoyed this story very much. Keep up the great writing and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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