| "Unbreakable, Unbeatable, Untouchable" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: lil_yapper On: June 28, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so awesome, and the ending to chapter was so cute! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: May 18, 2004 10:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT FIE DOES TO DUO. I HOPE HEERO GETS PISSED AT FIE REAL BAD.
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