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| "Dragon Ball Evangelion" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
/HOLY CRAP YOU RULE/!!!! Update, please, please UPDATE! This is the first ever NGE/DBZ fic I have seen where you actually balance out the power--and It's serious! I hope we get to see more of Ayanami! [Swoons] I just can't believe how great you are! Please, please, please, please update soon! sorry If I'm being obnoxious, but this is such a great fic and you haven't updated in such a long time!!
| Title: fledgling fanfiction writer
Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: September 21, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mostly, I absolutely loved this fic, even with the few events that happened to have triggered a couple of my DBZ and NGE vices(pet peeves). 1) Yes, I know that this is fanfiction and such allows the author to change the character circumstances however he/she wants. Unfortunately, when it comes to the particular point of Gohan's method of powering up after the Buu Saga, most traditional DBZ fans, and even some of the more radical ones, still tend to get pissed off when authors or newbies to the series believe that despite the fact that Elder Kai(Kaioshin) explicitly stated that Gohan's ability to go Super Saiyajin was lost when Elder Kai unlocked Gohan's hidden potential, during Gohan's training on the Supreme Kai's world. Frankly, this would make Gohan more powerful than even his father, as no energy is lost because of the strain brought about by the Super Saiyajin transformations, especially the the one tp SSJ3. Also, in Gohan's "Mystic" form, as his fully-powered state is called, Gohan does not burn even a third of the amount of energy Goku's SSJ3 form does in order to maintain it. These statements would be especially true if your storyline begins right after the fight with Kid Buu and the subsequent Dragonball wishes, and before the 25th Budokai tournament at the end of DBZ. Anyway, the reason this misconception of Gohan still being able to go SSJ tends to piss of the more hardcore or dedicated DBZ fans is because it reminds them of the bastard-child known as DBGT. Ciao!
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 23:47 CDT
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Now THAT, was a good NGE/DBZ fic. I liked how you made the Evas and the others euqals instead of having Goku and the rest be ultimately powerful. You could use a little bit more description on the battle scenes, but other than that I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see teh next chapter. - Chaos Damn It
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