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| "Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Reviewed By: RaineyNight On: March 01, 2010 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, first of all, I really enjoyed reading this! It was very original, and very enjoyable. There were a few commas left out, and some of tensing (past, present, future. I don't know if that's actually the word for it or not...) was a little bit confusing. But this fic made me smile, because it was just a very enjoyable read. I hope you don't mind, but when I get around to it, would it be okay with you if I recced it on my blog? I've just started it recently, and I thought my first rec would be of Harry Potter, but I would really like for your story to be one of the firsts. ^.^ Here's the link to my blog, if you have any objections to me posting a rec of you story you can just post a comment there. (Sorry if that's inconvenient for you.) Hopefully it's okay with you! Again, enjoyed the story! Thank you for writing it! ^.^ Here's the link: http://xxxbeautyofthebeastxxx.blogspot.com/?zx=4d6c1e145b07385f There's a content warning on there, but it's only for when I rec stories rated R or NC-17 (most of what I read...) Just wanted to let you know that it wasn't pics or anything. ^.^ I'm probably becoming annoying at this point.....
| Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2010 22:59 CST
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I absolutely loved this story. So much passion and love. I'm actually envious of their relationship described here. It makes me wish my relationship was like this one. Anyways, adored this, loved it bunches. Definitely going to recommend it to other YuKoe fans that I know. ^.^
| Reviewed By: Teeks On: October 05, 2009 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I gave it nines but overall ten. :P Might not make sense in math terms, but to my squeeing brain it's just fuckin' logical, kay? xD Spelling and style aren't AS important to me, I just rated because they were there. I've seen bond fics, so I just took a point off, no actual reasoning other than that. :P But it's that I ENJOYED this son of a bitch that's an overall ten. :P First.
| Reviewed By: Yuukifantasizer On: July 24, 2009 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't paying attention to the other ratings, sorry. But if someone says that wasn't a good yaoi fic, introduce them to me. They'll die screaming in pain. That aside, I think... Koenma/Yusuke became my fav. YYH pairing. At first I just liked any pairing where Yusuke was uke and wasn't that attracted by the other pairings but... You decided me. They seem like the most perfect couple out of all of them!
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 18:48 CST
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this was a good story, now i'm going to read the sequel
| Reviewed By: riot_Fox311 (AKA Emily) On: July 05, 2007 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, this just owned me so much. You now have the official rights to my soul, and my panties. It was hot and wonderful, and the plot made it believable. I loved how you handled Yusuke being a virgin and aside from one or two spelling errors, I could find nothing wrong with this story. It helps also that you're writing Koenma/Yusuke, because so few people do, and I'm aboslutely in love with them. :) So, I know this story is kind of old, but it pwns me nonetheless. Excellent work! (AND THANk YOU FOR WRITING THESE TWO!)
| Title: too lazy to log in
Reviewed By: anubiset TO LAZY TO LOG IN On: October 25, 2006 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honey, you wrote the sex scene very well. It is hard to find what you like and what the reader will like. I personally go with what I like and hope the reader likes it. Don`t be hard on yourself. Yaoi is still something that is new to the general masses. Even though men have been having sex with men for decades, it still has not been easy over the past several years for things to begin to change, though they are and with it, we writers and lovers of yaoi and slash are making a difference in the worlds perception. I hope you never give up that and help this world to eventually be a better place, where there are no more hypocrites roaming it.
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was very well done. Congrates
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SO awsome,I loved it.
| Reviewed By: Darkness Child [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel please!!! This is one of the few stories I have read with a Yusuke/Koenma paring and it was the best. This fic was great I really am going to have to check out your other work. Good Luck!
| Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: November 12, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!! SEGUEL!! This is the first Koenma/Yusuke pairing that I have ever read, and I loved it! I only thought that there were Yusuke/Kurama pairings in the world. Please write sequels,epilogues,side stories any thing more about these twoo. GOOD LUCK!! KEEP WRITING!
| Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say I'm really looking forward to those sequels you promised so I added you to my favourites list.
| Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style, very descriptive. You did keep switching tenses, though. I've read a LOT of fics based on this concept, but I'd say this is the best one I've read. If you made up the Tama-bond, it's a really good idea. (If you didn't, I don't know anything.) *goes to see what else you've written* One last thing: If you haven't written a sequel, please do! ^-^
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: KD-chan On: May 22, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm really the first to review? I'm amazed. This fic is awesome, if not slightly odd...but that's ok...I have an odd sense of what's good and what's weird compared to most ppl...Anywho! This fic is great, keep writing more!
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