| "A Night of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
where is the originality...[looking under the site] no where to be found...and umm...too cliche or as i want to say too not cool...come on even a baby can think of a better plot than home alone...and uh uh uh sweat coming out...
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Reviewed By: 654654 On: July 06, 2004 23:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good lemons come from the slow difficult fight the two have with eachother. They want it so bad, but their pride won't let them, and then BAM lemon. Or something else like situation stops them, either way the lemon was too fast. Take your time. Don't worry, good fic writting comes with practice.
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Reviewed By: Cternes On: May 21, 2004 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok, but could be a little more orginal and the plot is lacking.
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Title: Yeah, It's noticeable
Reviewed By: jcmver2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look at those scores. Every single one of those originality points were given because of the plot of having everyone leave the house. (And I'm being generous) Better get your thinking cap on and make up a better, longer fic. Everybody likes 'em long nowadays. (No pun intended)
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