| "Kindergarten Cop" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a totaly awsome story, you have to write more please, please, please, please. i am begging you!!!!!!!!! (and if you do, please make it so that Kagome tells Souta that she is his mother, and don't let Inuyasha or Sango know she is who they are looking for untill the very end when she tells them) you don't have to but i and many people who are too scared to review would love it
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Title: yay you!
Reviewed By: abercrombielvr07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please make another chapter!! this is a totally awesome story line! inuyasha would totally be a cop if he lived in present day!!! you are so smart! :DD cant wait until the next chapie!!!
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Title: First review! From pagan_sedjou
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am intrigued. I am spellbound. I also can't wait for another chapter. The first was really good. Your spelling and grammar are above average, which I like in an author. (It makes things easier and more enjoyable to read.) I really like it so far and hope that you continue. pagan_sedjou
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