| "Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 26, 2005 22:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah, if only first times were that great... nice writing though.
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Title: Not Bad
Reviewed By: Dragonlady2000 On: April 20, 2005 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its not bad at all for the first time, I say. You could have made the note of were they were in the begining. It realy dose help alot. But I got it twards the end, they were in Kagomes room? Well whatever, it was great! But whish it was longer, But great! lol.
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn ur good
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
are you sure that was your first time? prety good for your first time or was it... well any way keep righting
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...that was your first lemon? Good job!! That was hott!!!! Now go write more!!!
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Title: ending
Reviewed By: ajgldklg On: May 30, 2004 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
try ot make an ending more...... understanding like did they continue or slept or yea stuff like that
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (lazy) On: May 23, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, it was.
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Title: One word
Reviewed By: yumemiru On: May 19, 2004 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got one word for you: Nice!!!! I think I almost came reading that one!!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 05:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Standard, but good for a first time. Next time I suggest being a bit more immaginative.
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Title: TOO HOT
Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice. Hope you do another one.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad.. not bad at all... heh :)
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Title: THAT WAS HOT!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty( HOLY SHIT!) On: May 18, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a HOT fic!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!! I'm still hot from readin it!!!! First timer huh? coulda fooled me wrtting like that!!! Great job, can't wait for more from ya!!! Still.... HOT FIC!!!! Vellakitty ^_~
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 18, 2004 04:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
no not bad for a first timer.......................................................NICE! ~_^.over and out.
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