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| "Pgsm fanfic, untitled for now." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Derea of the Mountains On: April 14, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good story but you spelled many things wrong. You should get a good Beta.
| Title: PGSM
Reviewed By: reading bunny On: May 18, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. One thing that ruined the credibilty is the wrong word choice. I found a few, such as "After saying Mamoru get stabbed..."I believe u where trying to say "after *seeing* Mamory get stabbed." there is another one," ...and she will be *week*" ~~> don't u mean "and she will be *weak*" ??? over all it's a fun story ... and i would to read more.
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