| "Heartfelt Apologies" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Kawaii
Reviewed By: egyptian_miw [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was really cute. I really like all four of them together and I hope you update soon!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Now all I have to wait for is the lemon! Lemon please!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:08 CST
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don't listen to that last one...foursomes are awesome...its just hard to start them and i think you did a great job. Please continue soon, i love all of your stories
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 01:55 CST
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Ok... I really actually enjoyed this fic, until that is, I got to the last chapter... I'm sorry, but all four of them being in love simultaniously!? That is a little far fetched to me... There is a quote/ Saying thingy I want to pass down to you from a great and powerful Manga ka named Yu Watase... 'If I woman says she loves two men equally, then she really doesn't love either." I respect and believe that little piece of wisdom and believe this story would have been better if Ryo and Bakura had only loved each other and Malik and Marik had only loved each other. Other than that though it was an interesting look at how the two Yami's could change...
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 06:30 CDT
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this is such a Kawaii story, i love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Aroo
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute story. I mean, yeah it's a bit cliched, but still.. I love reading these types of fics. I'm glad that you took a bit of time with Ryou's trusting Bakura. Rushing in these types of situations can just ruin a plot right then and there. I'm also glad that you brought Marik and Malik into the storyline too. And to add, Malik was also having the same problem with his Yami. Heh heh, I like the joke with the corndog. Poor, naive, innocent Ryou.. lol. I'm glad that you ushered the group away from Yugi-tachi.. they suck! So nosey and boring! I kind of saw the four-way love triangle (no pun intended) coming. So, I'm guessing there will eventually be a foursome? Heh heh, I don't mind that at all.. Anyway, update as soon as you can. Oh and long ass chapters rock! Lol.. I'm hungry =D
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Title: sakayora
Reviewed By: sakayora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Hi! I really like your story! It's so funny! Especially when Marik was screaming about the sky exploding!!! ^_^ I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: anglc azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 03:14 CDT
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AWWWWWWW!!! that was soo sweet! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 20:58 CDT
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please update soon, I really like this story, and how it has a unique quality even with the common plot! ^^
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Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I normally don't like stories where someone is raped (especially when that someone is Ryou-chan), but this one I'm liking. Keep up the good work! ^_^ 10 for style of writing- You're a very good writer. Perhaps I'll check out other fics of yours. 10 for spelling and grammar- I could find almost no mistakes, and those I did find were most likely typos. 9 for originality- This is a good plot, but the 'Hikari beat by Yami, Yami feels bad, Yami falls for Hikari' thing is used quite a bit. 10 for enjoyment factor- as I said before, I really like this story. 10 Overall Rating- Umm... just because I said so. ^_^ Aaaaaanyhooble, do update soon! I want to read more! ~Mooselini McSqueegee~
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Reviewed By: Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I was really pissed when I saw that your story had only one chapter... Do you realise how... crestfallen I was??? I want more!!! You\'re one of those who have a really excellent style. And there\'re still so few Marik/Malik fics out here... *whines* And both my fav pairings in one story! Keep on writing! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: ImaginarySpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so far, keep up the good work;)
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it!! please please please update. Bakuras so cute and bless him mariks all confused. Long chapters are really cool so keep writing!
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