Title: awesome plot
Reviewed By: Puyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading your fanfic and I thought you deserved some feedback on it. It was really well written, your diction flowed together very nicely. The plot was very good, based on the manga's character development, the storyline you created could have been very possible. I enjoyed the dark twist that came out of the girl's desire toward keitaro. Only thing i didnt like was Shinobu's current situation, but that was also an asset to the story's deepness, I enjoyed it, keep on writing!
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