| "Into the Abyss" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: instructor
Reviewed By: Lin T. On: June 16, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Paul, I haven't had the time to read all of what you've written but will perhaps get back to it over the summer. Sounds like something my 12 year old may be interested in since he loves to read, write, and draw.(I will check through it first) He just finished the series Artumus Fowle (spelling??? not sure of) and loved the Harry Potter books. He's into all this..... Very creative writing, greatly descriptive, holds ones interest. Write on..... Have a great summer!
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Reviewed By: Nejik On: June 09, 2004 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was so amazing how we all just owned that one troll, LOL thats so great. also, i cant believe you put TunaF in it!! LOL, how gay!!! that thing got owned horribly. also, when victor got the power of darkness and a second kodochi, very cool. everything is so good so far, keep up the fic, i like it alot.
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Title: Hardcore
Reviewed By: Arcaron the Fox On: June 07, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, giving all the characters secondary weapons was SUCH a good idea. But me with a staff? LOL. And Paul, this Fic is SOOO good. Everytime i finish a chapter i start to hum the Wolf's Rain ending theme. I know its stupid, but its a good ending theme. Keep up the fantastic work! Cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Daddy-yo On: June 01, 2004 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a real page turner or screen scroller, the battles frequent and bloody. Just when I think there's not another way to take the life of some hideous creature, the author throws out a new type of slicing and dicing. I hope that winch is worth saving cause I think these super heros are in for alot more trials and tribulations
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Reviewed By: Arcaron The Fox On: May 21, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I love how i owned that drunk bum.
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Title: sweetness
Reviewed By: Victor Razador [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you did a good job describing it in the summary and the character bios are well done. and of course you developed the characters quite well :) i look forawrd to reading more of this fan fic and i hope you do not quit this fic because i really like it. ~Victor Razador
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