| "Someone Precious to you" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
To tell the truth I did enjoy it somewhat but it could have been written a lot better. I didn't feel anything for either of the characters and the lemon was rushed. (Can't believe I'm flaming someone) Sigh. You should think about written it.
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Title: Someone Precious To You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not lazy... *sniffles* nice fic.
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Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thouhgt it was good although Heiti's alittle occ but other than that it was good.Can u write some more chapters?
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Title: Someone Precious To You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: -_-*
Reviewed By: yuyusailor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei was a bit occ! >_:( But overall I enjoyed it so I`ll rate you a 10!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^(yahoooooooooo) ^^;;;;;
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Title: -_-*
Reviewed By: yuyusailor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei was a bit occ! >_:( But overall I enjoyed it so I`ll rate you a 10!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^(yahoooooooooo) ^^;;;;;
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Reviewed By: Messala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic was lacking some things ... conflict, emotions, and characters. It was dry, real dry. I hate to flame you, but you could do better.
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's interstirting! I was a little confuse and hiei's a little OCC but it was good!
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Reviewed By: sango_demon_exterminator [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is just as wrong as that fic Kurama/sango
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