| "Koenma's New Mission!!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... Not bad. I must say, I do think you need an editor to go over it. The story's good, though. If you'd like, I could fix the grammar for you.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the pairing is quite unusual, and I want you to know I REALLY liked it so far! I didn't however like the fact that your fic had so many writing and spelling errors. Annyways, UPDATE SOON! I wanna see if anything naughty happens with Yusuke and Koenma*winks*. Also, Keep up with the humor!
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Reviewed By: Saz On: June 06, 2004 07:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked! A lot! ^_^ How sweet is Koenma? There is a good balance of humour. It's not too much & not too little. Please try to get the next chapter up soon as i'd love to see where this goes. (Do you think sk8ergurl14 needs to calm down a little? o.O I certainly do. Sheesh!)
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Reviewed By: sk8ergurl14 On: May 27, 2004 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
it sucked. you said there would be lemon so , where the fuck is the lemon!
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Reviewed By: sk8ergurl14 On: May 27, 2004 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
it sucked. you said there would be lemon so , where the fuck is the lemon!
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Reviewed By: MukuroOfMakai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
its good for your first yusuke/koenma. and it was a little humorous. try to write the next chapter soon. i'd like to see if it gets funnier
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