| "Ethereal" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was funny hee hee
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Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 On: August 11, 2007 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I RECENTLY DISCOVERED THIS STORY , I REALY LIKED IT !!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update
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Reviewed By: DarkSilentKiller On: October 17, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic...I cant wait till it gets moving into action. But the thing i really didnt like is how u re-wrote everything in a different view.....Im not sure if it had a point but it is good either way. I hope u update soon... -Me
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Reviewed By: silverfire2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Story has a great start so far but why did u rewrite the secound chapter in Kagome's POV?
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an eye-catching story! Can't wait for this story to get moving into action!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Both chapters were great to read. I really liked how you put it in each others prospective.
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Reviewed By: Gothic-slave On: May 20, 2004 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good...but the second chapter was pointless...You shouldn't redo a whole chapter in someone elses point of view...it really is redundant...you already said everything in the first chapter so why say it again in the second? Was there a point to it?
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