| "The A.L.I.A.S. Vignettes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: guilt
Reviewed By: blood [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a good writer keep it up
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this thing is awesome. You've got the whole guilty lemon thing done to a que. It rocks. You rock. This one is going on the favorites list.
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost feel sorry for Asuka. As I can atest to from my own experience, guys who are shy, quite, introverterted (i.e. Shinji) are the ones who you really need to look out for when they've decided that enough is enough. I truely wonder how much more Shinji will take before he demands retribution from Asuka and what kind of retribution Shinji will demand. I'm forseeing handcuffs, a leather belt, and Asuka having problems sitting down the next day. And if Masato gets in on the fun, well, Asuka is in for a world of hurt. Ah such fun possiblieties.
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strange, let intregeeing. Please continue.
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