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Title: SHUT UP REDHERRING!!!
Reviewed By: InuHanyouRaeRae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shut the FUCK UP REDHERRING!!! This story is amazing and hawt. The point of fanfiction is to create a world of an anime episode and portray the characters as you would want them to be. If you want Kagome to swear, let her swear on!!! If you want Inuyasha to be a hot sex god(I believe we all do) let him be one. So I repeat. SHUT THE FUCK UP REDHERRING!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SRP On: May 16, 2005 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYY..........................scary.....sorta......write more....bye!
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 26, 2005 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm... wow, that was... interesting. The kinky part of me liked it, but the more subdued side was a bit taken aback. I'm not sure what else to say except...wow...
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Reviewed By: Think_Pink On: October 05, 2004 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOOOOOHEEEEEEEE!!! GRRRREAT!!!! *mumbles to herself* First thing on my list - done...*ticks off point1* Sencondly: to all those who flame other reviewers for their opinion and only write "Wow wow wow" -- ever heard of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? No? Thought so! *sends death glare* And thirdy...*glances on what-to-say-in-review-list* Well, I think the fic had a rather abrupt ending - I really would have loved to have some last sentences with some insight into their feelings! And, hmmm... I don't think, Inuyasha would hurt Kagome, either... *schrug* But except for this - excellent! ;)
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Bella Lamounier On: October 01, 2004 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! Well, I liked your lemon, but I just thought it was a little OOC... Inuyasha would never hurt Kagome... He practically raped her! And I don't think she would let him do things like that and then kiss him and pleasure him like he was a god, do you think? Well, besides that, your lemon was good. Kisses, Bella
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agre with nekofluffylover redherring shut up it was good. that was hot!
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Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my fucking god, will redherring just shut the fuck up already!!! anyway....WOW!!...seriously wow!1 excellent....WOW!!!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
You use ellipses too much. It's more okay to use them in dialogue to create a "dramatic pause," although that use is just as incorrect. To use them in narration, though, is for indicating an ommission of words of phrases. If you are not doing that, then don't do it at all. ////////////////// Other than that, Kagome was out of character. She doesn't swear, she's not that promiscious, and she wouldn't talk to Inuyasha like that. Inuyasha's out of character too. He's not that agressive with Kagome, and he's a much more complicated character than the -driven animal that you've made him out to be. ///////////////// But the lemon was ok. It still followed the traditional script, but there were a few slight deviations and original parts.
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Reviewed By: Bunc On: May 22, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Please write some more.
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
huh..wow..... .... quite a um...lemon.... so much force....woooo .....um...yeah...but i like it...but wow, wooo ....um....yeah
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Reviewed By: Moon Child (not signed in) On: May 22, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was quite good. I wish there was more plot to it though, more to it than Inuyasha's horniness and determination. It was good though, quite hot.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: mythY On: May 22, 2004 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN THAT WAS GOOD!!!!!!!
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