| "Mental" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm speachless... wow... There were parts in this story that were portrayed so well that I was left in awe of your writing abilities.... I was magnetically attracted to your story by some unseen force, and I wasn't left dissapointed. You did so well in playing the part of insaine people that I would somewhat think that you've tasted what it's like to be stuck in an insane asylum. I should know... believe it or not, I was labled 'crazy' and spent a good while at a hospital... even now, I'm stuck seeing a phycologist at least once a month, to where at first after I got out of the hospital I had to see her twice a week while being drugged out of my mind. Man it sucked, and it still does... you know... you don't always have to attempt suicide or homicide to get eternally branded by medical personel as 'insane'. But anyways, that's besides the reason why I'm leaving you this very long review. All I really wanted to express was the need to applude you for the factual way you portray the insane people that are always overlooked, or thought less of, as well as the facilities they use. I loved this story, and I now consider you an author I look up to. Congrats on this achievement. -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 16, 2004 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this is a great story keep up the good work. update soon please
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there, love your story, it's really interesting. I cannot wait to read more of it, hehehe. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Sutashii
Reviewed By: Sutashii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 11:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uhh I think your missing chapter one!! this looks like a promising fic I'd like to read it but *whines* I cant read it with out chapter one!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo this is the bomb
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Title: wow.....
Reviewed By: lunatrick114 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fucking amazing!! plz update soon, this rocks. Very creative!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent lemon, man, this fic is fucking fantastic! Keep em coming!
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Reviewed By: KiTTy PAwS-182 On: July 21, 2004 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good story. Please continue to update! ^_^ KiTTy PAwS-182
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooo cool, you have to continue and update! lol, um, the 2nd chapter is the same as the first, just to let you know.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 20:42 CDT
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Eh... so I misread the line. Sorry. But I still stand by what I said. Please don't make this another game of 'Keep away from the bad guy' with the Shikon no Tama.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 20:39 CDT
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We see enough of the Jewl in the anime/manga and all non-AU stories. Do we really have to see it again in an alternate universe fiction too? Seriously, come up with a more original plot than Onigumo/Naraku trying to get the jewl. It really isn't the most original plot ever, and has been done to .
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Reviewed By: kuroneko13(don't want to log in) On: May 22, 2004 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is very good update more plz
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: May 22, 2004 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting so far. Original plot. Can't wait to read what happens to Kagome. Please continue ^__^
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