| "Creatures of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 17:08 CDT
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Another terrific chapter! Great job with the Pokemon battle. I really liked it! I'll read the last chapter you have when I find the time. Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 17:25 CDT
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That was such a totally awesome chapter! Gary is one of my favorite Pokemon characters from the show, but I will admit that he IS a real idiot...! I liked the argument you put together with them! If I tried something like that it would end up some childish fight that would go absolutely NOWHERE! *shrugs* Oh well. I like your writing style...a LOT. Keep up your writing; you're the BEST! ^.~
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Reviewed By: piccolosgirl On: February 25, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please up date soon. its so good.
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: August 28, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really cool, update pppplllllleeeeeaaaassseee
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:23 CDT
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Oooooh! I'd like to see how Ash and Gary work together! I know how they don't like each other much! ^.^ Well, I'll be sure to read your other chapters later!
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way cool!!! ^____^ You do the BOMB of describing things! And all that bloodshed made me wince once in a while. ^.^ I liked the gunshot part. I actually thought that it was Midnight's gun, but I never thought that it would be Ash's! Really cool! ^.^ Anyway, I'll have to read your other chapters later! See ya! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Armored Red Eyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story you're writing! I just love horror stories! I wonder why Giovanni killed Ash and his father... It was a good death; very descriptive. ^.^ But I'm very squemish... Ugh... >.< I like the prolouge. Very well done. ^.^ I will have to continue to read this story. I'm very curious to see what's going to happen next.
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