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Title: Eeen-terresting, very interesting!
Reviewed By: Akita (and Subu-chan) On: January 19, 2006 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yowza, that was good! Worth staying up half the night for! (Hmm, not bad! Not perfect, but not bad.) Subu-chan, you meanie! That was a really good story! (I didn't say it wasn't, Akita, I merely said that there were a couple of minor rough spots, a few spelling errors, some incorrect syntax, nothing major.) Oh, I guess. But it rocked. (Sesshomaru was a bit OOC, though, wasn't he? Even you, the ultimate Sesshomaru fan-girl has to admit that.) So, it was cute! Ooh, such a cutsey-wootsy widdle Doggie demon!Yes, you are! Yes you are!(Blech! You are killing me, woman!) Oh, bite me! Don't tell me you wouldn't jump that hunk of sexy dog-demon if given half the chance! (Why deny the truth? I'm an equal opportunity hermaphrodite.) See! ( But your sugar-rush sweetness could cause Count D to go into a hyperglycemic coma! Down, girl!) Don't wanna! (Go to bed, Akita before I'm forced to make you watch Grave of the Fireflies and the episode of Fullmetal Alchemist where Maes Hughes died until you start blubbering inchoherantly!) Huh? Aren't I already doing that? (No. You're babbling inchoherantly. It's a fine line.) Hmm, I'm confused. (What else is new?) Subu-chan, that's mean! (I never said I as a nice hermaphrodite, now, did I?)
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Title: Nice read
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thoroughly enjoyable. Your characterizations are believable and all the OC are well done. I look forward to your next installment.
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Title: WONDERFUL!!!
Reviewed By: peace_gurl96 On: January 23, 2005 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Unfottunately, I hate to be left on the edge, so please put up chapter 8!!!! I'm dying to see what happens. You have an amazing ability to capture your audience, espicially me. I love the Rin/Sessy idea, and you have done an incredible job here with. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: Chitenshi On: August 21, 2004 00:22 CDT
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I'm just posting this to try an see if it will allow me to see the two reviews that I have been trying to read for the past two months. Hopefully this will work...
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Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed this fic. I think it is awesome and the plot is something new and fresh. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 01:42 CDT
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that was such a sad story. why does life have to be to hard? up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 (not signed in) On: August 01, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when you were going to update....Great chapter...on you that some secrets are out.....Can't waiting until the next chapter.......UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 22:43 CDT
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oomg omg this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 23:03 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 13:51 CDT
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so wait. if the two blood demonds are the true anchent rulers of the west shors does that mean that they will be taking over as taiyoukais instead of Sesshoumaru? and will that in turn mean that he can fully make Rin his mate? also if Sess does stay the taiyoukai he's going to have to eventually officially make Rin his mate in order for his son to be the next taiyoukai. because now that we know Rin is having a boy, he can be named the heir to the throne. right? hmm. at least Rin is ok. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: OooOoOOOO!!!
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO!!! I likey!!! O, pls, c'mon add a lemon!!! I adore sess/kag pairings. Is he the one she ran to? Well, anyhoo, it was good. Thank you for sharing your talent!!! You really are one of my fav authors!!! Come Sesshy-chan!!! Sesshoumaru: This Sesshoumaru comes for no one!!! *give evil glare to Sessy-chan* Sesshoumaru...ee...except for you... Buh bye!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 04:54 CDT
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Aiiii!!!!! that was a bit mean. was it the kitsune? you said they were from the east. wasn't that one of the lands that wasn't alighned to the west? they seemed a little suspicious after that. of course i'm going to feel like a jerk if they turn out to be good and save Rin's life. poor Sess. he's going to have a bloody heart attach when he finds out Rin's trapped under the building. i can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 00:37 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 03:40 CDT
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mm, an interesting turn of events. i have to admit i was like the general and never thought of the idea that Sess would have to not claim Rin in order to protect her. all of the other sotries i have read always had him claiming her and then just protecting her really well. actually in one fic he is decieved and fails to adiquatelly protect her, but it all turns out good in the end. this is an interesting story. i can't wait to see what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 00:19 CDT
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this is a great great fanfic please update soon
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