| "Heaven and Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: October 26, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!!!! ive been waiting since like forever!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Meletina (too lazy to log in) On: August 16, 2004 02:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...me likey! (please excuse I'm tired) ~~~meletina~~~
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Reviewed By: katt_jam On: August 14, 2004 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story so far, but you REALLY need to work on you spelling because you are making mistakes on the easiest of words. before you submitt a chapter I suggest you have some proof read it or use the spell checker. You have no idea how annoying it is to try and read something and there are a lot of errors in it. Anyway plwease have the next chapter out real soon.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_kagura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story plz continue
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Reviewed By: ShardxKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep going Ashly! It's a really great story!
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
good so far. you could do alot with this story. I look forward to readign more
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Reviewed By: Trigun302 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEll its to short! And It needs to be more interesting to read. But its speeling is great!
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaaay! I think it's great so far.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: May 23, 2004 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i thought ur 1st fanfic was great. u just might want to correct ur spelling a little(its k im a really bad speller and u spell things better than i do). at the end u might want a better tail hanger so that people want to read ur next chapter. trust me i come back everyday to read stories with a huge tail hanger. it just lurrs me in. heheh. nway. ur fanfic was great. please write more. soon. love always hglover2
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