| "Broken Heart, Heal My Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: very nice
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: June 29, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey. i like ur story so far. i would just like u to write a little more plz. update soon! oh and this being ur first fanfic, its going fine. trust me. just pick up the pace a tad bit and it will be even better. after reading what i wrote i think u'll know i hate writing flames. i always give my opinion and suggestions. if i see something i dont like i'll inform u(in a nice way.). i'll review again when u update. bye.
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: June 28, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like it better if it was finished but keep on going and i bet that other people will like the story better too if is was finished hope you update soon keep going cause most people don't like the writers that don't finish the story they were working on when the reader just gets interested in the story that is what i am saying i like this story so keep going and put more romanic gestures in there even if it comes from sango and morkoru or however you spell it but keep going cause i really want to see what happens with kagome and inuyasha "smiling it there is romance there too" lots of fluff too if you want to put that in there ok now i am done talking and for the last time i will say this keep going and update faster and hurry and finish please please thankx
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Reviewed By: Kags0021 On: June 15, 2004 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far i can't wait to see where you go with this.
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