| "The Transformation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is very cute and sweet. I LOVE it! You did such a good job with Rin/Shipp that I would like to see you do Rin/ Sess
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww!!! thats so cute!!...turn it into like eh..idk..maybe...a short story?...just an idea...that pairing is tooo cute!!!...loved it...
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Reviewed By: FellDrake On: June 30, 2004 05:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to hear Kagome and InuYashas reactions
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Reviewed By: vivi66(not logged in) On: May 25, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was so cute, i want to know MORE, i liked that they were just experiencing it for the first time, and didnt really know what to do. it was SWEET awwwww i loved it
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Reviewed By: dancin_cutie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luv it! i think u should really write an epiloge for this fic! i really enjoyed the shippou/rin pairing!
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: May 23, 2004 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is supposed to be a one shot but I think an epiloge would be really good. I would like to see how everyone reacts since they will be able to smell it. I would really like this to be a longer story but I will settle for an epiloge.
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