| "Crush" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Yami Yuki On: September 06, 2004 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Y.Yuki here, i cant update right now, i'm sorry! dont spear me!
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Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!! I can't wait till you update!!!
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Reviewed By: santurion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! I'm glad you're writing Jou/Yugi, b/c it's a such rare pairing. It's really great! I hope you continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Yaoilover S! On: May 30, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man that is a good chapter you wrote! I really like that you included some Japanese words too:thumbs up: My favorit part is when Yami aked Jono if that bicth(Anzu) is there. I hope your lemon is as good as your ideas!i'll tell my friends about this fic.=D P.S.if you want to send me a message or something like that my adress is: kiki-chan@pacbell.net ja ne!
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Reviewed By: AreyaTomori [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story's coming out grat. I really enjoyed the first chapter. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 28, 2004 11:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. It is cool. I think you should post again soon. I`d love to see how Kaiba reacts to Yami.
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Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yoh! That's an interesting start, hm... I don't usually read these pairings, but so far it's cool. I'll read the next chapter as soon as you post, sooo... Go write! Away with ye! Heh, the disclaimer was a nice reference, "'Allo, poppet." Ah, yes, amusing. Hm... I just now noticed... I'm reviewing your fic... But you've yet to review mine... Hey! Go review mine now! And then write chater 2! And bake a real chocolate cake while your at it too! Go! *whip cracks* I mean.... Your chapter is very nice.... Espesially the part about the pats. Heh, heh... Painted on...
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Reviewed By: Hikari Motomiya On: May 24, 2004 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... nice start so far. The part where Yami screamed "Thank Gods!!" when Jounochi told him Anzu wasn't coming was funny. XD ...Anyway, please continue, I guess. ^^ ~* Hikari Motomiya *~
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hm... Should I be a cold hearted bastard or should I give my honest opinion...? *smirks and does a Yami laugh* Eh, honest opinion... Vixen-san! Interesting way to start... And I do think Seto would go to the party because he would just want to protect his brother... I mean anime Seto. The manga Seto is mean no matter what... And scary looking too. Yami and Yugi actually don't wear leather pants in the show but... Whatever! ^_^ "Take what you can!" "Give nothing back!" ~Pirates of the Caribbean. Oh, and the lemon in three chapters?!! Geez, so soon... I think a little torture is awsome for fan fics. For the readers, the character, and (sadly) me. But do what you wish... I'll read it.... Ja! (Gomen! My english teachers are getting to me!!)-_-;
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: Lightning Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Haha, that was funny. I like it so far, can't wait to read more!
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Title: Weltkaiser
Reviewed By: Friedrich EinFuchs On: May 23, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad for a chapter 1. I wan't to see more! Problems: Separating Yami-Yugi w/ no explination... Seto wouldn't go to Yugi's party...
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