| "New Girls and the Fun Things They Do" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: a bit tweaked
Reviewed By: ~sam~ On: July 12, 2004 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
um... i really like the fanfic... it's great and all, but well, this has been bothering me for a bit. kurama bloody ADORES his mother. you got their relationship all wrong, it's nothing like normal teens and their parents, mostly because Kurama is a far cry from a normal teen. he feels he owes this human woman for all the agony he put her through when he was a child. so he treats her like a treasure and as much as i'd like him to be, he's not that meek either. ::tear:: your knowledge of the citrus rules, but i'd say you are pretty new to Yu Yu Hakusho ~sam~
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Reviewed By: inkheart (blah) On: July 04, 2004 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so maybe i am too lazy.............but come on who isnt? anyway....... kenshin can get on your nerves....i feel for you guys...... but anyway......i love your story and i hope that you continue it and dont get mad at me for not reviewing all those other times...... DAMN FIREWORKS!!!!! WHATS WITH PEOPLE AND FIREWORKS??? they are so annoying....... trying to type and having to listen to them on and off is iritating...........geez........ anyway luv ya! byez!
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Reviewed By: inkheart (too lazy) On: July 04, 2004 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOMENESS!!!
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Reviewed By: inkheart (too lazy) On: July 04, 2004 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the cute welcome pic!!!! its so kawaii!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: inkheart (*yawn* too tired to login) On: July 04, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ahem* i am sorry that i didnt review for every chappie but im feeling particularily lazy/tired and...... wait maybe i will............... be right back!
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Reviewed By: Olivia chan On: July 01, 2004 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Stuppid cliff hanger!!!! Well I luv yur story so much.
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 19, 2004 01:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Helcat:Damn you and your cliff hangers. Thanks for killin Julia. I hate rabbits. My cousin had two, and one scratched the right side of my neck and the other peed in my lap when I was holding her, but thats another story. Anyways, thanks for bringing Yoko back so now I forgive you about *cough*last review *cough*
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Title: @_@
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Shit! WHY THE HELL DID YOU END THE CHAPTER LIKE THAT HUH. *breathing fire now* AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN KNOWONE REVIEWED THE LAST CHAPTER CAUSE I DID! please hurry with the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so. Are youy going to let Kurama turn into Yoko again. Oh and that was very clumsy of you walking into a wall lol.
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Reviewed By: anime123 On: June 03, 2004 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsom story!!! love it so far i hope your not done!!!this is a great story so keep it up ^-^
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Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arina: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! CONTINUE ONNA!!!! DG: that happens to be Arina, my demon half. she likes lemons, and R rated stuffs. so please continue for her before she decides to hurt something or someone! Ja ne!
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