| "Deul" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: A little off
Reviewed By: voodoo predator [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well yoou were a little off on the characters. I say this as a person who unfortunutly used to who have an obsession with inuyasha, and somone who likes trigun. Well first of all vash and wolfwood aren't that cruel well maybe wolfwood but definatly not vash. second vash is is not the type to cry when inhjured just when he's sad, but he probably would whine about his leg hurting. and lastly you made kagome a little to much of a bitch. Oyeah and one more thing YOU you crushed my hopes I was just hoping sob just hoping that you would put a little sob comedy into it, I realy that you just make that mysterius (sry bad spelling) voice...................................................................... .......................Michel Jackson!..... LOLZ!
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Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad but it could stand to use a little more detail if you don't mind me saying. Good job though ;). I enjoyed it! Keep up the writing!
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Reviewed By: LDD [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that's pretty cool! Rin's a cat demon now? Uh oh. Thanks for your comment on my story. I'm sorry the first chapter was so sucky, it does get better! I hope... Good luck with the rest of your fic! LDD
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