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| "Red" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: keiran311 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, prepare to be bombarded with a reduntantly verbose description of my thoughts on your story, Red. Despite that you had my third favorite character kill off my favorite character, I actually liked this story quite a bit. I've read it before but never had the chance to comment on it. However, as I have a moment and have realized how much negative attention this story has gotten, I feel I must put in my thoughts. I happen to like yaoi, so I saw nothing wrong with that. I think that it moves a bit too quickly in the beginning, but that the fast speed works well at the end. In the first few parts it would move more smoothly if you slowed it down a little and didn't just zoom through it. The plot twist was truly unexpected, and well done. It left me wondering more about why Heero had done it. Actually, that's the only thing that annoyed me, though I think I can understand a few reasons for not concluding it with his reason. It works out perfectly as it is, and the impact from it is great. Everytime I read it I'm brought in the same way and, even though I know that that plot twist is coming, I'm still caught by it, and I still feel the same little rush (and anger) with the outcome. I'm sure these other people had a good reason for flaming you on it, but I personally think that the thought behind it, if nothing else, is enough to make me overlook the fact that Duo is dead at Heero's hand. I hope you do this well on other fics-and original stories-that you write. As a rule I tend to not rate the stories that I read, but I think that on this one I'll have to do it, so that you will be able to see that I'm not joking when I say that it deserves much more praise than what people have been giving it. (and because I need something to distract me from that one review where the person absolutely butchers anything even remotely resembling the English language. I not only shuddered, but I had to scroll down so that I wouldn't start to twitch. It really was that bad. I swear it was.} But now I've used up almost all of my characters allowed for this comment (when I finished I was at 1232 characters left to use, though I ran out of things to say without repeating my thoughts even more-yey for caffeine and sugar when I'm posting things like this. It really makes for a strange, redundantly useless response.) and have babbled quite enough at you about the same old things, so I think I'll leave this off. I look forward to any future stories that you write, and have already added you onto my favorites list. I think that, with just a little bit of work, you could become an amazing author. Good luck with your writing!! K'yra, the Queen of Spades.
| Title: ummmmmmmmm
Reviewed By: llama gurl On: April 15, 2005 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmmm ok it was really cool....inill u made dem gay...i mean even in da beginen whyed u make duo gay!!!if u hadnt put in da yaoi it would be fine but...u could of had duo take a shower...and heero come in and kill him.. well other than that u were good llama
| Reviewed By: sakura-dono On: June 13, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel like i should kill you. how could you have heero kill duo like that you are a sick bastard. you got me all excited then you kill duo off. you know what fuck you
| Reviewed By: Rishee kun On: May 27, 2004 10:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting! wasn't awaiting that!
| Reviewed By: lil_yapper On: May 24, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how in the world could you do that!!! it was getting so good and then you just destroyed the moment by having heero kill him!how could you do that!!!
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