| "AIEEEEE! My credit card is gone!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: marikandcloe not logged in On: August 21, 2004 20:43 CDT
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I say you do Joeys house. Cuz JoeyxSeto is cute. By the way do you like Tea? 'Cuz she's icky. Keep writing and remember math suxs getting good grades gets u big bucks! (my friend told me that I think she was sugar high)
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 20:53 CDT
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I say that you do a short chapter every week because I want you to contimue this story and I suggest that he does Yugi's house first to search for his credit card.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 22:35 CDT
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Ooh! Reviewing! Yes, this fic is awesome. Very awesome. poor Seto and his lost credit card... Jin and Yugi? Imagine them alone in a room full of sugar... Meep! Ok, I like short chapters, lots of updates. That's good. I can live with that. Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Obscured Illusions [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! I'm reviewing my own fic! Why, you might ask? Because well... it had no reviews for this chapter and that made me sad ;_; ::cries:: KATE! YOU RULE! ... Thank you ever so much. Yup! That's why I'm giving you 10 out of 10 on everything! Yayyyyyy! ..right. Well, cheerio! ~KATE
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is funny. Kaiba chasing his little brother around the house with sugar? Hyperactive. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 24, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahahahahaaa, I just imagined Seto's face as he falls in the pool, the tv-reporter of the six o'clock news commenting on the full-screen, slow-motion headshot, hahahahaaa! You absolutely *must* continue this story, I'm craving for a decent Seto-bashing(hehehee, Seto fall down, go *clunk!*, heheheee..!^^)
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