| "Playing with Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 21:58 CDT
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i think u should have mercy on him man...poor heero- kun i mean come on!! it's just sad toturing him like this though it is pretty entertaining..o well i still go with my vote MERCY!!
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Reviewed By: Ayachan32 On: July 30, 2004 23:22 CDT
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lol, do whatever you want, but keep the ring on Heero please ^_^
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Reviewed By: princesspriscillamaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about using e-stim toys on heero and making him cum continously for a few hours?
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy (Not signed in) On: June 10, 2004 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU USED MY REQUEST! Woot! Okay, now I have another one. My Next request is, for Duo to have a candle, a lighter, and a bowl of hot wax. Heero would be chained to the ceiling again, with his knees chained too, basically Heero is hanging from the ceiling, cause his feet aren't touching the floor, kinda like sitting in a chair except he has no chair. Duo would blind fold Heero, and light the candle and let drops of wax on on Heero's legs, Then he would take the bowl of hot wax and plunge Heero's cock in it, thus coating his cock with hot wax, then screw Heero, while Heero will has that vibrating bullet, in him on high, and of course don't forget the cock ring. Until the next request/chapter, abayo!
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Reviewed By: lady_eversor On: June 09, 2004 22:04 CDT
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I think you should have a little mercy on 'poor' heero. Put him in duo's place, or have them both tied up and the entire audience of girls having their way with them. Or even better do both.
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Title: Hey idea
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: June 07, 2004 20:31 CDT
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First of all take the cock ring and make him come.... but im kinky and i want Duo to take him in the mouth.. jeje... later.... ummm make heero stand up and stay chained so Duo... once again... put a cock ring on him... and a blindfold... and start teasing touches... with a rose... or other thing soft... and later maybe a little spanking... and finally... the big screw time... till he reallyyy beggg to come... sorry brother in law but its time for fun for my brother Duo jeje..
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Reviewed By: helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on Duo, take the ring off of heero. Let him cum.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My request is that Duo have Heero gaged and spanked. He could use candle wax, or maybe even chocolate.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, My I like very much I thing Hee-chan has been very naughty and needs a spanking
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Reviewed By: Halo3465 On: May 30, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I don't have any ideas for you but I'll review anyways! So far I've really enjoyed this fic. It thinks its what I've needed since finals studying. I 'm so stressed! O well. You're fic is an enjoyable read/. 10/10. Thankies!
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Title: kayoko_0_chan@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: kayoko On: May 30, 2004 12:26 CDT
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love your fics as always ^_^ oh...just wanted to let you know of fic contest: "art of sex toys" *grins* http://www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com/gw/Fic%20comp%20page.htm oh...what i want to see...maybe something to do with wax? that's always cute...abusing food items is good too...maybe...hm...kelp? *laughs* it's slimey and wet...a very weird texture..probably able to tie something with it...heh..
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Reviewed By: evilchild [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to beta-read the fic!!! I would give ideas if I weren't going to use them for myself. So if you want me to be your beta e-mail me at ylrebmik7@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy (Not signed in) On: May 26, 2004 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say put a cock ring on Heero and never take it off and put a vibrating bullet up his butt oh high speed, while having Duo do him doggie style. Heero of course would be chained to the floor, by a collar on his neck and his hands too. XD Yes I am a pervert. But hey you said we could.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey. please update soon I want to know what happenes next...I can't wait to read the very very good lemon you haven't finished.
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Reviewed By: OtosuHanyou101 On: May 24, 2004 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YUM YUM YUM and YUM!!! I luv 2x1's! Duo as seme is just soo kewl! Heero as uke to anyone is...umm...Wufei! Word! *Justice?...* Exactly! Thanks Wuffers! *My name is NOT WUFFERS!!* You can just sleep on the couch tonight! *Damn it all to hell...* >pouts< Okay, you don't have to. (sighs) *Yes!* I can't resist that pouting. Why don't I have willpower? whatever religious figure is up there either really loves me or really hates me. N e way, GR8 story hun! Keep it up! CHICKENS!!!
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