| "Playing with Heero" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Animestar73 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS THE SEXIST THING I HAVE EVER IMAGINED!!!!! XD!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG! I think you should totally have mercy! Oh can i make a request? (even thought this review is like 3 years later) Oh take of the cockring! then put Hee-chan on the bed, tied up in silk ribion! give him a good massage (that will make him turned on) then blind fold him. (HEE chan is on his back by the way) Then proceed to do him!
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Reviewed By: EphermeralAries8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep it on *grins evily* hehe!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 09:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Mercy! I wanna see what happens next
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 09:17 CST
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I am undecided. If you show mercy the lemon will end if you do poor hee-chan will be let free. =_= very hard decision.
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Title: No Mercy
Reviewed By: Darkening Dreams On: November 04, 2004 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I really think you aught to leave it there. I hav eno ther idea's sorry!
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 21:58 CDT
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i think u should have mercy on him man...poor heero- kun i mean come on!! it's just sad toturing him like this though it is pretty entertaining..o well i still go with my vote MERCY!!
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Reviewed By: Ayachan32 On: July 30, 2004 23:22 CDT
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lol, do whatever you want, but keep the ring on Heero please ^_^
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Reviewed By: princesspriscillamaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about using e-stim toys on heero and making him cum continously for a few hours?
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy (Not signed in) On: June 10, 2004 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOU USED MY REQUEST! Woot! Okay, now I have another one. My Next request is, for Duo to have a candle, a lighter, and a bowl of hot wax. Heero would be chained to the ceiling again, with his knees chained too, basically Heero is hanging from the ceiling, cause his feet aren't touching the floor, kinda like sitting in a chair except he has no chair. Duo would blind fold Heero, and light the candle and let drops of wax on on Heero's legs, Then he would take the bowl of hot wax and plunge Heero's cock in it, thus coating his cock with hot wax, then screw Heero, while Heero will has that vibrating bullet, in him on high, and of course don't forget the cock ring. Until the next request/chapter, abayo!
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Reviewed By: lady_eversor On: June 09, 2004 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should have a little mercy on 'poor' heero. Put him in duo's place, or have them both tied up and the entire audience of girls having their way with them. Or even better do both.
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Title: Hey idea
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: June 07, 2004 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all take the cock ring and make him come.... but im kinky and i want Duo to take him in the mouth.. jeje... later.... ummm make heero stand up and stay chained so Duo... once again... put a cock ring on him... and a blindfold... and start teasing touches... with a rose... or other thing soft... and later maybe a little spanking... and finally... the big screw time... till he reallyyy beggg to come... sorry brother in law but its time for fun for my brother Duo jeje..
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Reviewed By: helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on Duo, take the ring off of heero. Let him cum.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My request is that Duo have Heero gaged and spanked. He could use candle wax, or maybe even chocolate.
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, My I like very much I thing Hee-chan has been very naughty and needs a spanking
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Reviewed By: Halo3465 On: May 30, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I don't have any ideas for you but I'll review anyways! So far I've really enjoyed this fic. It thinks its what I've needed since finals studying. I 'm so stressed! O well. You're fic is an enjoyable read/. 10/10. Thankies!
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