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Reviewed By: amy04 On: September 10, 2004 14:36 EDT
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You updated! Mrs. Briefs is better than the U.N, isn't she? It's so funny how she has everyone making nice. So Vegeta is the King and he's married and Yamcha's rader is telling him something's up--this could be a really interesting B/V!!!!
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Title: I change my name a little bit.
Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 10, 2004 00:04 EDT
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So The growen up Vegeta is Vegeta not King Vegeta. and The kid is Vegeta...I'm Really confuse now. I hope the kid wake up soon.
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 16, 2004 20:57 EDT
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Is this going to be a Bulma/Yamcha? because it may be hard to get Vegeta/Bulma being for the fact Vegeta is a kid. or is that kid not Vegeta at all. The grown up Vegeta, Is he King Vegeta or is he Vegeta? .....Um... Now I'm confuse... add the next chapter soon, Please.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 05:41 EDT
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HURRY UP!!!! Hurry up and update this!!! NOW!!! This is a VERY intriguing begining... I'm guessing that is's Vegeta's brat that crashed on Earth, and maybe decides not to destroy the unfortunate planet's citizens when he sees a certain Blue-haired Beauty?? So... will anyone else be part of the raiding party?? *Bats eyelashes engagingly* Radditz's father perhaps?? Will he be making a stopover in England?? Will he meet a certain auburn haired beauty there?? Will he annhialate her for calling him her Honey Lamb, or will he take it for the humorous, affectionate jest it was intended as, and take her back to Vejiitasei with him to live and love forever?? ... None of this is going to happen, is it?? :((
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 21:09 EDT
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Well, one chapter down and I'm already hooked. I really like how you've interwoven some things from the anime into your own little AU. I love the idea of all the Saiya-jin being alive still. Hmmm. So Vegeta is a child? How's he supposed to hook up with Bulma??? Great job so far kiddo!
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Title: I'm hooked!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LisaB is writing an A/U!!! Story moves flawlessly. I'm beginning to admire your very spare, efficient, modern prose more than ever--the style is evolving so beautifully. You've captured Goku and Krillen dead on in just snippets of dialogue, and the whole piece has a nice lilting tone, so full of promise and excitement. And I can trust you to be kind to Yamcha! (however you get him out of the pictuer so Vegeta can move in!) YEY!! your fan, debbiechan
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