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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 14:15 EST
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Oooooooooo! I'm on chapter One and not only am I pleased to discover this is a Chibi Vegeta fic, but it's also a King Vegeta ficcy where the Saiyan race is still intact. Hell ya- This is grrrreat!
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Reviewed By: SSJ-Spiderfan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 16:53 EST
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Aside from the idea of Trunks' lifestyle, (don't get me wrong; I have strict morals) I enjoyed this fic. A lot different than what I'm used to since I don't really like stories where Vegeta, is, well, with another woman, and likewise with Bulma but this one turned out pretty good. Great work. =)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now there's something that you don't run across very often in DBZ fic-dom: a non-B/V fic that centers around B/V! You had me all choked up when they made their decisions and actually kept them. I honestly expected them both to throw away everything they had to rush into each others' arms. The other world/other time section was very poignant. I really loved how you pointed out all the events that had to happen in order for the two to meet. It really was amazing how many odds they beat. Vegeta's realization that he ended up exactly where he should have been, and subsequent claim that Bulma is the other half of his soul gave my goose bumps goose bumps! Beautiful fic, kiddo!!!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 13, 2004 01:38 EST
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You're welcome, LisaB! *Laugh at the T-shirt joke* Hahahhaah!!!!, "In another world, in another life, I will find you,"*Starts to grin* I say you will, Vegeta...you will.*Grins even more* Yay! Vegeta got a grandson! Aye...you both are luckly.*nods her head*
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thanks. It is so refreshing to see a fic where infidelity is not seen as an obvious recourse. Your writing is above par. Even when the excess of "mary-sue's" are removed from the equation. Poignant. Very well done. Keep writing, please.
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh wow. I get this foreboding feeling that this AU doesn't end happily. But I can't wait to read more. BTW, I love their conversation at the end: fate and its endless possibilities. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 29, 2004 22:16 EDT
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Good job, Radditz! You sure show Chi Chi! Wait a moment....Vegeta is a Super Saiyan!? Vegeta, If you lose to Freiza you would have been in his serves and you would still when to earth....but more evil or something....That what I think...
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Reviewed By: Evelyn (Vegge's Mate) On: October 17, 2004 07:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I didn't know this was here. I'm enjoying it a lot and would love to read more very soon. I love the suspense. At first the Vegetas were confusing. But everything makes sense. I love how this fic is so in tuned with the series. When I started reading I was so disappointed that it was only three chapters, especially since they are so entralling and hence quickly read through. So please update soon.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 23:23 EDT
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Tricky, tricky! I guess you set me straight on which Vegeta was which. I can't wait to see what you do with those extra spouses laying around! ;) Very fun fic so far!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 10:12 EDT
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Somehow I managed to miss this one. Very interesting so far. An A/U like I've never seen before. Can't wait to read more.
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Title: I change my name again...Gah!
Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 13, 2004 21:29 EDT
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Aww....Love is in the air...Well, Love is kinda in the air..
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 23:21 EDT
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"Don't take Tomorrow for granted. It breaks promises too easily." I love that line. I've never heard that expression before. Very good chapter although I'm looking forward to all of them realizing that they are married. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 11:04 EDT
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ah, Denmark said he left a review! (sorry to see it was so lame--for shame, den!) He's right that you just want more at the end of this. After thinking about my angsty Raditz for so long, it was fun to read these 2 chapters again this morning. Your tone is true to the series and the characters and everyone, from Oolong to Mrs. Briefs, is dead on. I loved the bit about Tom & Jerry! And I do get the readers' confusion btwn King Vegeta and kid Vegeta, but Vegeta is so obviously himself very quickly that the little "negative capability" in the 1st chapt is fine--it all adds to the suspense. In the words of Oliver Twist---"more please."
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Reviewed By: denmark On: September 12, 2004 22:28 EDT
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nicely done. you leave me wanting more. i hope to see more posted soon.
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Reviewed By: Anouk On: September 11, 2004 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original, I love it! Is king Vegeta the Vegeta we all got to know in dbz and gt, or is it the old guy with the gotey?
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