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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 29, 2004 22:16 EDT
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Good job, Radditz! You sure show Chi Chi! Wait a moment....Vegeta is a Super Saiyan!? Vegeta, If you lose to Freiza you would have been in his serves and you would still when to earth....but more evil or something....That what I think...
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Reviewed By: Evelyn (Vegge's Mate) On: October 17, 2004 07:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I didn't know this was here. I'm enjoying it a lot and would love to read more very soon. I love the suspense. At first the Vegetas were confusing. But everything makes sense. I love how this fic is so in tuned with the series. When I started reading I was so disappointed that it was only three chapters, especially since they are so entralling and hence quickly read through. So please update soon.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 23:23 EDT
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Tricky, tricky! I guess you set me straight on which Vegeta was which. I can't wait to see what you do with those extra spouses laying around! ;) Very fun fic so far!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 10:12 EDT
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Somehow I managed to miss this one. Very interesting so far. An A/U like I've never seen before. Can't wait to read more.
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Title: I change my name again...Gah!
Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 13, 2004 21:29 EDT
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Aww....Love is in the air...Well, Love is kinda in the air..
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 23:21 EDT
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"Don't take Tomorrow for granted. It breaks promises too easily." I love that line. I've never heard that expression before. Very good chapter although I'm looking forward to all of them realizing that they are married. Thank You for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 11:04 EDT
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ah, Denmark said he left a review! (sorry to see it was so lame--for shame, den!) He's right that you just want more at the end of this. After thinking about my angsty Raditz for so long, it was fun to read these 2 chapters again this morning. Your tone is true to the series and the characters and everyone, from Oolong to Mrs. Briefs, is dead on. I loved the bit about Tom & Jerry! And I do get the readers' confusion btwn King Vegeta and kid Vegeta, but Vegeta is so obviously himself very quickly that the little "negative capability" in the 1st chapt is fine--it all adds to the suspense. In the words of Oliver Twist---"more please."
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Reviewed By: denmark On: September 12, 2004 22:28 EDT
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nicely done. you leave me wanting more. i hope to see more posted soon.
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Reviewed By: Anouk On: September 11, 2004 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original, I love it! Is king Vegeta the Vegeta we all got to know in dbz and gt, or is it the old guy with the gotey?
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Reviewed By: amy04 On: September 10, 2004 14:36 EDT
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You updated! Mrs. Briefs is better than the U.N, isn't she? It's so funny how she has everyone making nice. So Vegeta is the King and he's married and Yamcha's rader is telling him something's up--this could be a really interesting B/V!!!!
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Title: I change my name a little bit.
Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 10, 2004 00:04 EDT
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So The growen up Vegeta is Vegeta not King Vegeta. and The kid is Vegeta...I'm Really confuse now. I hope the kid wake up soon.
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Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 16, 2004 20:57 EDT
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Is this going to be a Bulma/Yamcha? because it may be hard to get Vegeta/Bulma being for the fact Vegeta is a kid. or is that kid not Vegeta at all. The grown up Vegeta, Is he King Vegeta or is he Vegeta? .....Um... Now I'm confuse... add the next chapter soon, Please.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 05:41 EDT
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HURRY UP!!!! Hurry up and update this!!! NOW!!! This is a VERY intriguing begining... I'm guessing that is's Vegeta's brat that crashed on Earth, and maybe decides not to destroy the unfortunate planet's citizens when he sees a certain Blue-haired Beauty?? So... will anyone else be part of the raiding party?? *Bats eyelashes engagingly* Radditz's father perhaps?? Will he be making a stopover in England?? Will he meet a certain auburn haired beauty there?? Will he annhialate her for calling him her Honey Lamb, or will he take it for the humorous, affectionate jest it was intended as, and take her back to Vejiitasei with him to live and love forever?? ... None of this is going to happen, is it?? :((
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 21:09 EDT
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Well, one chapter down and I'm already hooked. I really like how you've interwoven some things from the anime into your own little AU. I love the idea of all the Saiya-jin being alive still. Hmmm. So Vegeta is a child? How's he supposed to hook up with Bulma??? Great job so far kiddo!
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Title: I'm hooked!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LisaB is writing an A/U!!! Story moves flawlessly. I'm beginning to admire your very spare, efficient, modern prose more than ever--the style is evolving so beautifully. You've captured Goku and Krillen dead on in just snippets of dialogue, and the whole piece has a nice lilting tone, so full of promise and excitement. And I can trust you to be kind to Yamcha! (however you get him out of the pictuer so Vegeta can move in!) YEY!! your fan, debbiechan
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