| "Another World" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! That was great, I wish I had known about it earlier!
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:53 EDT
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ohh! This is kinda sad! I like that it's so undeniable that they have to acknowledge it right away. And that reference to the real DBZ universe and the real Vegeta and Bulma was great!
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:24 EDT
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yes! I knew it! Bulma already likes him! haha! another great chapter! :-)
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:08 EDT
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Oh, ok! The Prince Vegeta in the normal DBZ timeline is king and the little nboy in the pod is his son? ooh! they are gonna cheat on their spouses?! Woo HOOOO! Dirty! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 14:33 EDT
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Vegeta's a little kid? Aww! How the fug old is Bulma then? hmmmm. This is pretty interesting so far, and I also really liked the fic "For Yamcha"
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: April 19, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweeeeeet
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Reviewed By: wouldn'tyouliketoknow On: April 02, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure you've hear this often, BUT you are such a brilliant writer!!!! I've read quite a few of your other stories and I'd say you keep up your standards. I hope you continue writing stories until your old and grey...
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:46 EST
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O.o Radditz is alive... Nappa is alive... Heck, even Toma is alive - and yet my little stud muffin has had a nearer death experience than one would hope for?? *Shocked* Yes, I finally have the opportunity to read this! :D You'll get a proper review once I've read it all (On ch 2 at the moment) I just wanted to complain about the poor old git not being... properly alive... :((
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"In another world, in another life, I will find you." Perfection. What else can I possibly say? There was no sex between Bulma and Vegeta. She didn't get pregnant with their child. There was no dissolution of relationships. You balanced everything perfectly. I was initially miffed with the addition at the end until I realized that you were FIRST presenting an alternate reality- You had never lost sight of "Our" universe at all! Very well done.
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 14:15 EST
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Oooooooooo! I'm on chapter One and not only am I pleased to discover this is a Chibi Vegeta fic, but it's also a King Vegeta ficcy where the Saiyan race is still intact. Hell ya- This is grrrreat!
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Reviewed By: SSJ-Spiderfan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 16:53 EST
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Aside from the idea of Trunks' lifestyle, (don't get me wrong; I have strict morals) I enjoyed this fic. A lot different than what I'm used to since I don't really like stories where Vegeta, is, well, with another woman, and likewise with Bulma but this one turned out pretty good. Great work. =)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 22:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now there's something that you don't run across very often in DBZ fic-dom: a non-B/V fic that centers around B/V! You had me all choked up when they made their decisions and actually kept them. I honestly expected them both to throw away everything they had to rush into each others' arms. The other world/other time section was very poignant. I really loved how you pointed out all the events that had to happen in order for the two to meet. It really was amazing how many odds they beat. Vegeta's realization that he ended up exactly where he should have been, and subsequent claim that Bulma is the other half of his soul gave my goose bumps goose bumps! Beautiful fic, kiddo!!!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: November 13, 2004 01:38 EST
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You're welcome, LisaB! *Laugh at the T-shirt joke* Hahahhaah!!!!, "In another world, in another life, I will find you,"*Starts to grin* I say you will, Vegeta...you will.*Grins even more* Yay! Vegeta got a grandson! Aye...you both are luckly.*nods her head*
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 15:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thanks. It is so refreshing to see a fic where infidelity is not seen as an obvious recourse. Your writing is above par. Even when the excess of "mary-sue's" are removed from the equation. Poignant. Very well done. Keep writing, please.
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh wow. I get this foreboding feeling that this AU doesn't end happily. But I can't wait to read more. BTW, I love their conversation at the end: fate and its endless possibilities. Keep up the good work!
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