| "Another World" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChristineBrooks On: August 07, 2011 16:23 EDT
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Hello LisaB, I was very charmed by this fic! Its hard to find an original B/V's nowadays, everything has been done twice at least! ;) Your Vegeta was a little bit 'lighter' than I usually imagine him to be. However, since your Vegeta would have been less scarred by loss, failure and a life full of murder than the original DBZ one, it did not feel OOC to me... Thanks for writing it! Anne p.s. I didnt write a review for it, (sorry!) but I was also very taken by your explorations of the rammifications of 'coercing kakarot'. I liked the way how the relationship between Vegeta and Goku was fleshed out without cheapening either Bulma or Chichi. Also I liked the fact that though the ending was hopeful, not everything (i.e. Bulma's guilt) was happily resolved...closure simply does not always happen for everyone... |
Title: so new...
Reviewed By: lilimayhwm On: June 25, 2006 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on this fic. It's been a long time since i've actually read an original B/V fanfic. A bit sad, and nicely written. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 16:14 EDT
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I remember this one. It's one of my all time favorites.
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Reviewed By: De On: March 01, 2006 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read! And now I'm going to review...if Media Miner lets me. Sometimes it doesn't, so don't feel bad about the lack of reviews. This is a great fanfic: well thought out, developed plot line, good developement in character, no OOC moments, and no forcing the love that should have been. That way it comes off as sweet and sad and poignant. I really like it, hope you write more!
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Reviewed By: n1c0le On: January 08, 2006 04:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i no you wrote this ages ago but still a great story i loved it a few things i didn't like about it but i still loved it thanx for writing it
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Title: atu
Reviewed By: atiqa On: July 16, 2005 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh it was so beautiful and i loved the ending. keep on writing like this. ^-^
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! That was great, I wish I had known about it earlier!
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Title: ch4
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:53 EDT
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ohh! This is kinda sad! I like that it's so undeniable that they have to acknowledge it right away. And that reference to the real DBZ universe and the real Vegeta and Bulma was great!
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:24 EDT
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yes! I knew it! Bulma already likes him! haha! another great chapter! :-)
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 15:08 EDT
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Oh, ok! The Prince Vegeta in the normal DBZ timeline is king and the little nboy in the pod is his son? ooh! they are gonna cheat on their spouses?! Woo HOOOO! Dirty! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 14:33 EDT
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Vegeta's a little kid? Aww! How the fug old is Bulma then? hmmmm. This is pretty interesting so far, and I also really liked the fic "For Yamcha"
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: April 19, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweeeeeet
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Reviewed By: wouldn'tyouliketoknow On: April 02, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure you've hear this often, BUT you are such a brilliant writer!!!! I've read quite a few of your other stories and I'd say you keep up your standards. I hope you continue writing stories until your old and grey...
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:46 EST
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O.o Radditz is alive... Nappa is alive... Heck, even Toma is alive - and yet my little stud muffin has had a nearer death experience than one would hope for?? *Shocked* Yes, I finally have the opportunity to read this! :D You'll get a proper review once I've read it all (On ch 2 at the moment) I just wanted to complain about the poor old git not being... properly alive... :((
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"In another world, in another life, I will find you." Perfection. What else can I possibly say? There was no sex between Bulma and Vegeta. She didn't get pregnant with their child. There was no dissolution of relationships. You balanced everything perfectly. I was initially miffed with the addition at the end until I realized that you were FIRST presenting an alternate reality- You had never lost sight of "Our" universe at all! Very well done.
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