| "The Office" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyied it. Im always readin T/P and G/B but a T/G really threw me off and i like that soooo... keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: telynaayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is one of the few oneshots that appeared to my taste, nice job.
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Reviewed By: Messala [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice. This fic was pretty good all in all, especially for a one shot. keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: Jess-Chan On: May 28, 2004 12:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
The fic's pretty good, and I only have two things that I'd like to mention. 1) Trunks has purple/lavender/whatever-shade-of-purple-you-wanna-call-it-hair. I didn't understand why it was referred to as "aqua" and "bluish-green". That kept confusing me. 2) The fic itself was good, but the ending seemed too abrupt. Maybe if you could modify it with another paragraph or two, it'd have a better feel to it. I didn't mean to criticize you or anything, just point out things that others readers might have trouble with. Cheers.
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