| ""Shards of Our Memories": The Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: NekoCeles [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
: ) Good story! Though I have seen them, I have never read a a story with the cast in a Soap Opera. This is enjoying me.
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your ending it?! But it's so good! But I see your point, love the story, it's been a joy to read!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: November 28, 2004 19:36 CST
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great! i hope it ends more cheerful than this chapter. *sniff*
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: November 02, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! are you gonna update soon?!! i hope so..... i want more!
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Reviewed By: Hatira (ISR=InuSessRoxx) On: September 17, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job, hope you update soon c ya's!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 17:07 CDT
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love it, update soon
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 01:40 CDT
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Aww, I thought the romantic raw fish scene was cute. Good update! Looking forward to the next. 12 chapters, huh? That's nifty, we're almost done! Great work. :)
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Reviewed By: great story On: September 11, 2004 14:23 CDT
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great story! i enjoyed it. hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Hatira On: September 02, 2004 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Job, hope you update soon, au revior mon ami! ~*Let the sun and the moon dance in the sparkles of the night...*~ ~*InuSessRoxx*~
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Reviewed By: TwistedEvilStapler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 14:39 CDT
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"Plot devices dashed her hopes" I really like that. Not to mention the rest of your story; it was very good too! With so many Inuyasha fanfics out there, it's hard to come up with something even resembling original, but this story's been presented in a unique way, and that's just awesome. You do an excellent job with details too - not too little, not too much. And your characters are 'reasonably in character.' That is to say, they stick with their personalities, but the fact that they've lead different lives fits into their character as well. My only complaint - only three more chapters!? Oh well, I'm looking forward to them.
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Title: shards of our memory
Reviewed By: justi gordon On: August 26, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Oh my god girl! You turned me into mush with that kissing scene from "Passions" Talk about burning down a house with intensity! Wooh! Inu and Kag want each other...wonderful..and can't wait to see more of it! This whole soap theme is really cute..you're doing a great job with it!
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Reviewed By: shriylon On: August 21, 2004 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off, I'm laughing my head off. second, you've got to update before...I come after you with something...big and..pointy! Oh yeah, you know I will. *attempts glare* in all seriousness, this is a really great fic. I love your sense of humor, and while I hate soaps with a passion, it's fun to read. Inu Yasha seems a bit more dramatic than he usually is, but other than that your character writing is wonderful! I especially loved 'hoho' and his acting prowess... ^_^ see you next chapter~
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Title: so close
Reviewed By: ws03 On: August 20, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
kikyo was almost out of the picture, why did you write that part? update soon please.
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