| "Boot Camp & Booty Calls" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: anime_game_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pritty good please continue it
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Title: very nice
Reviewed By: rdsjr_1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to first off congratuate you on this work. i love this story so far and i can not wait to see what adventures Lucien has with his girls. Not only that, i am looking forward to what Cassie's role in the future is. I'm kinda drawing my own conclusions that I'd like to think where this story is going, as for long term; yet i am not the one writing it. All in all, i give this story a 10/10. i really have enjoyed reading it so far and look forward to your updates
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Title: review of thew latest chapter
Reviewed By: merzbow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 14:30 CDT
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in short awsome as usual loved it lucian's new girl sounds interesting and i cant wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: merzbow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i rather enjoyed reading this(ive not got much expericnce with pokegirl stuff but am hopeing to get more) over all it is a very well written piece that i cant wait to be updated. as another reviwer pointed out its nice to see taming show as a serious job. also the sex scenes we have had so far have been nice(meaning v.hot)
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Reviewed By: bugMeNot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, a very slight delay in update.. Enjoyment Factor is only 8 now, but I believe that will go up once you've written more chapters since this seems to be so far more of a buildup or prologue than the actual story (or something). I gave it an overall rating of 9 since it could go either way (10*3+8/4=9,5) and I'm a pessimist at heart, or so I'm told. I hope the next chapter won't take so long, it really is a great story.
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Reviewed By: TadrithRashkae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:32 CDT
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My apologies. I forgot to spell check my review.
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Reviewed By: TadrithRashkae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good over all. I noticed some gramatical errors in the secound chapter. Nothing that detracted from the story just little ones. I can't find them now but while reading thru it I noticed them. The only reason for the other nine was that while I like your stories there is a, the best word would be a resemblence between the main charecters of your stories. This isn't a bad thing as most authours write like that but I've read your Livejournal posts about nonspecific feed back . Its not that your charecters act the same but its more as if they all start at the same place before the story starts and start divirging from there. I'm sorry if thats not very clear but I don'tknow any better way to put it. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
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Reviewed By: RanjuM1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to start out by saying that I enjoyed the work very much and that compared to most online smut authors you're quite talented. That being said, this isn't your best. (I much prefered Blackout truth be told.) I noticed that when you deal with certain characters you tend to play favorites and you assign roles based on stereotypes that you have associated with the character (Many authors do this and it isn't always a bad thing.) This some times leads to character redundancy however, when you place the same trait's on a character in a different story. Like I said this isn't your best but perhaps you could work on diverity between characters in your future works. (I know when you actually use the same character in different fics it can be hard to try and shed light on a different aspect of their personality, especially with characters as two dimensional as Mihoshi or Harley quinn)
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Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 15:02 CDT
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I can't explain how excited I am to see you updating a pokegirl story again. Please don't make us wait this long for the next installment. Thanks! ~MaginMan
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: dragente [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update its well written and continues the story will still having a great amount of smut in it.
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Title: cmon!!!
Reviewed By: fists44 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this stories fucking awesome man!! write a new chapter already its been 3 fucking years! i need to c the continuation or something man! your killin me dude, killin me....
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Reviewed By: Galanodel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is simply amazing. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read the next several chapters. PS. I am also interested where else I can find other good Pokegirl fics and info.
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Reviewed By: MaginMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 16:00 CST
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Wow, I can't believe I never took the time to read this one before. This was your only Pokegirl Fic that I hadn't indulged in, and while it isn't my favorite (On the Run), It's definitely better than most I have read. I am also glad to see that you have come up with yet another interesting plot that hasn't been done to death. Considering you're the guy that got me interested in PG stories, I hold your stories to a high standard. Just one complaint: why does there always have to be a hot lesbian? What's wrong with Bi, hmm? Yeah, I know you love your lesbians, but this southern girl is killing me.
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Title: forgive gramatical erors please
Reviewed By: Dragon_black On: September 12, 2004 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice seeing a story set in this type of uneverse thats not just a string of talentles lemons. This is a really good story, one of my favrits on this site. I'm also intrested in the universe your writing in. Could you please include info about were to find more GOOD "pokegirl" stuf? (Thanks for spending so mutch efert on this story)
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Reviewed By: Phantom_iceboy On: August 27, 2004 23:02 CDT
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Haha I forgot my name is Nick. =P
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Reviewed By: Phantom_Iceboy On: August 27, 2004 20:11 CDT
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By the way. Think ya can add another main person? And if ya do can ya please add me? 5'11 mild build blusish green eyes brown spike hair nice guy to get along Oh one more thing I love things that are cold! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Phantom_Iceboy On: August 27, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty damn good! Most people just write dumb stuff it seems.Anyways, keep going I love it so far!
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Reviewed By: original shadow On: August 12, 2004 02:37 CDT
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really new and interesting plot, showing the camp and all very interesting a great job indeed keep going
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Reviewed By: DJ On: August 02, 2004 02:22 CDT
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You have made an interesting note of the population comparison that is rarely explored in its implications. If the pokegirl population is really huge compared to the available tamers and they are increasing among the ferals through parthogenesis, then it is surprising that tamers aren't being killed off at a high rate by ferals, accident from taming something that crushes/burns/freezes/"other horrible way to die" they shouldn't have or evolved beyond their abilities to handle, of just get killed from something stupid by accident like drowning, frost bite, heat exhaustion and so forth. The mention of how proper business practices are needed to make it to retirement is also insightful and often neglected to others.
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Reviewed By: DJ On: July 24, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Interesting story. There does not appear to be many stories that treat it as a serious profession.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 22:25 CDT
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this is a realy good story, i look forward to more in the future. keep up the good work. Ja-ne
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