| "With Sugar and a Cherry on Top" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: With Sugar And A Cherry On Top
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters please? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: good
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
A little confusing but for a first I'd say you did a good job. Writig lemons are something that takes practice. Love Yah!:)
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Reviewed By: inukagluver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is cute! but I'm a bit confused, was she masterbating, then Amon came? wouldn't that be a bit embarassing for her?
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Title: With Sugar And A Cherry On Top
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: With Sugar And A Cherry On Top
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: NiGhT-ShAdE On: May 25, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you placed Amon in at that place was nice timing and had a nice twist off. You did well for your first lemon. Look forward to this lemon arch you might present us with. ~NiGhT-ShAdE~
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Title: >D
Reviewed By: Elyssu On: May 25, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!! Duo-chan strikes again!!! >D Cool fanfic . . . and you said you couldn't write. . .you big ass! X3 Anyway, it was really good, nice adjectives and descriptions. I really don't remember much of witch hunter robin, since I ca't really watch tv >
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