"Fours best friends and many surprises" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: That was cool Reviewed By: Gokuru Chan On: June 04, 2004 20:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You are the best at making desciptive stories Ana .. It was so cool and yes ... I am a klutz ... reveal the truth girl! preech on sistah!
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Title: writer Reviewed By: Tokyo Rose* On: May 28, 2004 10:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ana! i like so far and im waiting for the second chapter! hey space out your dialouge i got a little confused :) and girl use spell check !! LOL !! look out for my story too at fiction press called 'Fastamiine Go!' don't ask me where i got the name i dont know either! LOL! but really thanx for giving me my inuyaaaaaaashaaaaaa! :D keep it up ana! love ya! -Ashley
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