| "To Be Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: j On: July 26, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story! Hatori is my favorite character ever! The bunny is awesome especially for this story. But doesn't he call hatori-"ha'ri" Anyway keep going, its a wonderful story
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Title: it's nice
Reviewed By: KawaiiUsa On: June 06, 2005 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiyo it is Usagi-chan here to review for you I enjoyed what you have written for the story. I believe you should work on your grammar a little bit though, for example: start a new line whenever someone new speaks. I think your idea is good as well kee hee! plz continue to write.
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