| "The Green Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's been a while since ihave read anything FFVIII related. im loving this story so far, but have one vague suggestion, i ask that you put just a little more detail in as some parts are kinda vague. dont get me wrong, im really enjoying this, but that is my only issue with it. i think it is very possible for Squall to lighten up and alway thought he would be something like how you have written him. I cant wait for the nexxt chapter!
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Reviewed By: KH-FF lover On: July 01, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for you! You're finally getting a review from someone else! This is very original and exciting! Anyway, you're doing a great job and I would like to see more postings very soon. Great job! ^-^ (The only thing I see a flaw with is some spelling errors, but that's okay, because there're hardly any at all!)
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Reviewed By: Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before when I read this... VERY GOOD!!! Now how many chapters do you have to post?? 4? or was it 5? *laughes at all the other readers* You have to wait to read them! Hahaha! BTW, my AIM? It's HieisLittleStarz. IM me!
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Reviewed By: Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhhh... I almost forgot! I'm downloading AIM as I type this. I'll talk to you soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 18:29 CDT
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RED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! First review!!!!! Even though you don't have the chapters up yet.... ^-^ Hehehe, I'll review again when you get your stuff up!!!!
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