| "Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chezaswolf On: August 27, 2007 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YES! sasuke w/ wings!! I know its been a while since u updated but please do! write another! please!
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Reviewed By: PrincessOfTheUnderworld On: July 16, 2007 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again um i know that your probably really busy and all but maybe you could continue and i know that you last updated a long time ago but please could you update i really want to read more please!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Looks up with puppy dog eyes tears rolling down cheeks* anyways Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 15:55 CDT
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woah! thats a great idea! You should continue! *holds shiriken to throat* hurry up and continue.
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Reviewed By: PrincessOfTheUnderworld On: April 28, 2007 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great story and i first read it years ago i came back to see if maybe you had updated it but you havent and i really want you to so maybe if you have some time then maybe you could update sometime soon please!! anyways hopefully it'll be updated soon Ja ne;)
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Reviewed By: ceruleanblade On: January 18, 2006 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... awesome fic! i noticed something familiar with the whole wing thing. i love the way you wrote this fic. you remind me of a friend of mine (well your writing style does [the little notes at the end of each chappie]). i like how you made the story so graphic. the legend is very good as well. it reminds me of something i've heard of before but i'm not exactly sure from where. anyways plz upate this fic soon because you have me hooked on it. ummm... by the way..... IF your going to make a coupling for this fic, can it PLEASE be a naru/sasu pairing?! i havent found as many fics as i would like to involving that pairing. if you want to keep you original idea and not make a pairing at all, or choose a different one, thats ok, because i wont stop reading this (this fic's too awesome to stop!!). so anyways great job with this fic, and plz update soon. ~cerulean blade~
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Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far!!!! ^-^ I hope u keep writting and update soon!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: DrakeDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 19:51 CST
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this is a awsome fic, please update more soon
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Reviewed By: WookieeBeta On: October 07, 2004 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thou shalt post, or thou shalt suffer. I need say no more.
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Reviewed By: RabidFan not logged in On: October 02, 2004 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is great I can't express how great this is! Its wonderful!!! Finally an origional Naruto story! Thank you God of all Naruto Fanfics thank you *Bows*.Please update@! ~RabidFan not logged in
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: August 20, 2004 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool, but the legend reminds me of something i read before, i don't Quite remember...... anyway cool story!
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Reviewed By: deanna-chan On: August 18, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i've read the 3 chapters that are up. and I like where the story is going. I want to read more! I hope its up soon.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 08:28 CDT
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A really interesting plot. Good writing. cdk
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Reviewed By: melaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 04:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
ya know i really like this but you take so fricken long to update i completely forgot about it.Please update more often if you can. But still keep up the good work. TaTa
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Reviewed By: Pinkl3monad3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ther are a small amout of stories, where the main (er..one of the main) character gets wings.it was written so grapicly, that i even flinched, when you discribed the bloody mess his wings made...any ways. hurry up with the next chaper...if not ^_^
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Reviewed By: mehgirl On: June 02, 2004 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hm... interesting.. keep going! ^__~
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