| "Inuyasha Almost Gets Run Over By A Truck" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!!! and make the chapters longer
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Reviewed By: Finish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
HI Oghie!
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Reviewed By: Finish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weird story. I'm guessing it's your first. Here are some tips: 1)Maybe you should get an editor to check your spelling and 2)don't forget to indent and make more than one paragraph so your story doesn't turn out to be one big blob. 3)Update more often, unless this is a one-shto story. Well, hope that helps.
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