| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: tonight?
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
what year is tonight?
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww.... that was so sad keep up the good work and udpate again soon please? i can't wate to find out what's gonna happen!
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Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update is very good
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 12:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update it sounds very intersting!!
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Reviewed By: Natsu no Okibi On: May 28, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah. Sorry about the low ratings but you see, not much has happened and so far its boring. So please update real soon and try to write something with more...oomph. Something enjoyable. Oh, and please check your spelling. This is not a flame. In fact, this is actually pretty good.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
The pairing is fine but you need to get a Spell Checker and have someone help you with your grammar. This is NOT a flame, but I must tell you that there are way too many mistakes in this chapter to list them individually. However, the only way you will improve is to keep writing and learning from your mistakes, so please continue to write your story. Kagome is rather Out Of Character in this chapter but I am not sure where you are going with this story so that may change in your future chapters. Keep writing and try to improve your writing skills.
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 27, 2004 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great start so far!! I only read Inu/Kag, so no worries here ^_^ can't wait for the next update!!
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