| "Somewhere Out There..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: PINAS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING *CANT SPELL@_@.WHAT HAPPENS I'M INPATIONED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: somewhere out there
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys On: June 03, 2004 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like this fic eeeh the cliffy part is great can't wait for another chapter update ASAP please
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Reviewed By: twistedpyro On: June 02, 2004 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
yah, Goku seems a bit idiotic and childish in this story....he's kinda OOC.
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Reviewed By: Flamingo6584 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. Goku can be pretty goofy, but I never thought he was a peeper-I like when they are a little out of character though. I like that Bulma is tough and not intimidated by Vegeta in their first encounter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Iss_a_dora69 On: June 01, 2004 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good i love it can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess... On: May 29, 2004 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Looks Cold and grumpy* Very nice...is there more to come? There is more to come, right? I liked Kakarot and Vegeta...they were characterised very, very well. Hmm...I'd type more but aside from electrocuting my right hand the other day I have also managed to fry my left hand. (Don't ask...I'm accident prone!)
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Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 10:23 CDT
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lol Goku is just too stupid for his own good... I liked a lot the way you managed to maintain Vegeta's character and at the same time added some 'teenager' feeling to it, without going too OCC... Very promising. Update soon
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