| "Breaking the Habit" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Mileniua [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good writing of this story. I don't usually like SetoxJou fics but it was good. Maybe it shouldn't be quite sooo mushy, but it was a very good read and it actually made sense. Maybe you could read one of my fics? http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php?cid=247343&sub mit=View+Chapter&id=76174
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can deeply relate with Jou and I love this fic. I've written a BTH fic for another fandom, and it was also a suicide fic. Though many including me think it's supposed to be a suicidal song, supposedly, in the making of the BTH video, they group said that it's supposed to be saying that the person is going to stop whatever they're doing and try to make their life better. Still, I absolutely love this. I hope you write more.
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Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: Tsukuyomi On: August 21, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire time I read this I cried the whole time. It had such meaning and it changed the way I look at self injury today. I never thought of it the way you put it, but now you have given me something to think about for the rest of my life. Now I know even though this is only a story but it's something that could actually happen to someone I know and love today.
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 10:16 CDT
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Aww, the second chapter was so cute! You have to love those people who want to join the loved ones they've lost, and I think the way you wrote it turned out great! Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 04:37 CDT
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Wow again. If anything could've surpassed the first chapter, it was the second. It hurts so much to have failed, and I can understand what Seto went through. I came so close to being that way... *shudders* I don't want to even imagine how much it must have hurt Seto to know that just a few more days and it never would have happened, and now that I know that my friends would go through hell for the same thing as Joey did, I know it was the worst deciscion Seto could have made. It was just the only one he had. Keep up the good work...!
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Oh, and I was and am abused sexually by my grandpa, and my parents verbally and physically abuse me... I've thought about writing on the walls in my blood, but I've never gotten around to it...
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Ok... this is really really creepy! You stole stuffs from my mind! No one can go in my mind! How did you know what I was thinking anyways? I'm recovering from Jou was trying to fight, only because one of my friends betrayed me and told my parents that I did it, otherwise I'd still be doing it now, anyways, it's the hardest thing to do... You know you can't do it, but this "compulsion" just tells you that you need to do it, that you need to cut to live... Even though you know it's only hurting you more, you still feel the need to continue and it just tears so slowly away at you until you break and do something drastic... Please continue this in any way that you can, I would really like to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: White Fanged Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Did you go through my brain and pick all of this out? If you did, that is just creepy. This is a wonderful fic that holds deep meaning for me. I am not abused phhsically or sexually, but everything else is just way to close to mirroring my life. As it was two years ago, and now. I know how hard it is to quit. Regretabley, everything that I have fought against keeps coming back to bite me in the ass. It makes life soooo hard. But I just wanted you to know that this holds sway over me. It was frightening to read this and see the similarities. You are now going in my favorites. P.S. Would you please continue this?
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 01:04 CDT
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Wow... to see everything I deal with every day presented to myself from Jou's point of view is very unnerving. Every self-mutilator goes through that same hell; I know, I'm recovering... This is a very deep and meaningful fanfic... Keep it up... Poor Jou... *snuggles*
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