| "A life renewed, for the best or for the worst?" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Geminidragon (to lazy to log in) On: October 31, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooo this is so cool!!! i love it!!! ooooo i want a ryou/bakura pairing and a yami/yugi pairing!!! yay! anyway, plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: July 14, 2004 11:38 CDT
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Yes to the Bakura/Ryou pairing. Hope to see it soon.
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Reviewed By: Magician Valkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 14:29 CDT
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Interesting, i liked it! I think you should put in some stuff with Ryou and Bakura though, it'd be interesting ^_~! Anywho awesome story, can't wait for the next chappie!
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Title: . . . .interesting take . . . .yes
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(need to find out y I can't login) On: June 28, 2004 03:53 CDT
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Writer's block, eh? Try music, games [card/video/role-playing/etc.], anime, and other fics. And never doubt the fact that most girls want a nice little Ryou and Bakura pairing, myself included. Just one thing: for the love of "Ra" don't have Ryou be beaten or abused by Bakura. I've seen too many of those and not enough where they act human to each other. Oh just one last thing, if you need an idea about the next chapter, why not have it be about R and B bonding like Yami and Yugi just did? Have them awake at different times, hell give R a dream in which he talks to B about stuff. Anyway, good luck with the writer's block and just ask yourself, "What do you want out of this fic?"
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 12:57 CDT
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Oh my Ra! You can't leave it there! Yes, RyouxBakura pairing all the way!! ^^ I'm obsessed with that pairing and if you don't put it in I'll... I'll flame your fic! No, I won't really. It's awesome so far, how could I? Please update soon! And please have RyouxBakura in your next update!
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 23:26 CDT
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o_O ~Bats eyes innocently~ Erm... I didn't mean to call you a blackmailer? :) Don't take me too seriously! I don't actually mean half the insults I say! Story's going good so far too, so I can't wait for your summer to start up so I can read more. :) Have a fun time, 'k?
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 22:43 CDT
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Well, there's one review for you, so here's your second! :) Now continue already! Having lots of fans does not constitute whether you're a good writer or not! It's how much that those that do enjoy your story genuinely love it.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress_Sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 22:40 CDT
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You blackmailing beggar! I shouldn't even bother reviewing! I always wait until halfway thru a story to make up my mind about anything; meaning you're not gonna get what you really deserve when it comes to proper critiqueing... Anyways, the story is interesting so far so you needn't worry about that. Things are a little confusing, but hopefully as you continue writing this, that'll all clear up. Now, your writing style is good, as is your grammer, yet for some reason it's a little hard to follow at times. So watch for that (tho I haven't even been specific what it is to watch for ~ but that's what you get for making me review already!). I'll probably review again later on once I've seen more of your story and I actually know what to say.
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 19:15 CDT
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That depends on what church you go to. I agree with you about some churches, but not all are like that. Heck, I've been to some once good churches that turned bad. This story is good so far, but your plot really confused me.
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