| "Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: love this story
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 14:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U r one of my favorite fanfic authors. I really love this story and Mistress also. I hope that all is well with u and ur family. I hope someday u will be inspired to finish all ur stories. |
Title: obsession
Reviewed By: is dare! On: June 01, 2006 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET!!! i would SOOO luv 2 work there as 1 of Bulma's employers...scientists of course!!! u know all your science words!! now dat's hot!! GOOD JOB!!!!
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 16:52 EST
Comment/Review:
excellent story. I've read it before, on ff net, I think. I even stored it on my disk. Please finish the story this time.last time you stopped one chapter after this. glad you decided to post it here.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story so far. Must read more!
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Title: Obsession
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very strong and i can feel the pain betwwen them. i really love this story and i really can't wait for more.. do you have a web site? please update soon. maria
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit On: October 31, 2004 22:43 EST
Comment/Review:
good.. i like it.. and why haven't you updated it?
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: Fiore On: May 29, 2004 17:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
It's good so far!
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Title: where have you been all my life?
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent writing! Why have I missed your writing? Glad you posted here (I boycott ff.net). Heartfelt, strong dialogue, compelling psychological drama--all that good stuff! I'm so hungry for B/V's that aren't just masturbatory fodder or infantile princessy fantasies. This is a good one!!!!!! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very talented writer! You have written this story very well..I am looking forward to an update! Keep it all going.
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